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6/14 c2 Cassandra30
Poor Mattie.
6/14 c1 Cassandra30
Good start.
12/24/2018 c25 38fictionalmike
A lovely story; thank you.
2/13/2016 c25 Gisou1950
I enjoyed reading your beautiful story and didn't loose my time. Please continue it until the birth. Readers want to know the choice of Harm after speaking to General Cresswell ( you could do it as an epilogue).Keep writing.
9/13/2015 c25 steamboat
My apologies for the tardy review! I can also understand (hormones) Mac's poor treatment of Harm when she got her transfer. ) Lol! My compliments to you for having written a very thoughtful and at times, heartwrenching, story. It was a good, entertaining read! You did leave the door open for a sequel, which would make me very happy should you write it! Thank you for sharing your talents with us!
3/30/2015 c25 Rebecca
Great story, sad in the beginning, but a happy ending. Great writing, keep it up
3/7/2013 c17 steamboat
I'm stunned! Mac weedles her way into Harms life, gets him to open up to her, realize that he is in love with her, and then she just dumps him! what a screwed up, frigid, pathetic, excuse of a woman she is!
you are doing a wonderful job in telling the story though. I just don't think much of Mac!
10/14/2012 c25 angeliena
I love this story! What is the name of the sequel of this story?

Bye Angeliena
12/12/2011 c1 kim
why would the police go to her to deliver the knews?harm was not her family.
8/10/2011 c25 jjgeraghty
I really hope you write a sequel for this one! I love your stories! You are a great writer!
8/9/2011 c25 tim
ooh! rubish. you made me loose my time dear. fanfics like these are so frustated and it's not inteligent.
7/29/2011 c25 sandra
please give to them a baby boy. you know the name rabb wil always be in the family when their grand children arrive.
11/26/2010 c25 GreenEyes09
This was a terrific story. I loved it so much.
10/1/2010 c25 Michi uk
Of course you should continue, you couldn't leave it like that. JMHO!
10/1/2010 c25 dizzzlizzz
I love your stories and had to go back and read this one again so I could decide. It only needs to be continued until the baby is born and we find out if Harm gets relocated or retires etc. You are a great writer - keep up the good work!
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