for Bruise9/6/2010 c1 
50Niphuria
This is actually quite adorable and shows just how a funny story can be written even in just a few paragraphs! I laughed out loud. LOL : D
Nicely done!
I didn't read the other reviews yet, so just in case, in the future -
Make a new paragraph for every new speaker. More than one person should never speak in the same paragraph.
Oh, and just in case anyone reads this and can drop me a quick line -
I LOVE Harry Potter, however, I don't read much of the Fanfic just yet because right now I'm "AiW", however, I keep seeing this "Blaise" character. I don't remember any Blaise even tho I read all the books. So, did I just forget him, or is he someone's Author Creation and various Fanfic people use him? Or did he have a short part in the Rowling books and I just forgot?
Anyway, again, loved this story! Hermione or Ginny I thought, surely would bruise him! ;) Hermione won!
50NiphuriaThis is actually quite adorable and shows just how a funny story can be written even in just a few paragraphs! I laughed out loud. LOL : D
Nicely done!
I didn't read the other reviews yet, so just in case, in the future -
Make a new paragraph for every new speaker. More than one person should never speak in the same paragraph.
Oh, and just in case anyone reads this and can drop me a quick line -
I LOVE Harry Potter, however, I don't read much of the Fanfic just yet because right now I'm "AiW", however, I keep seeing this "Blaise" character. I don't remember any Blaise even tho I read all the books. So, did I just forget him, or is he someone's Author Creation and various Fanfic people use him? Or did he have a short part in the Rowling books and I just forgot?
Anyway, again, loved this story! Hermione or Ginny I thought, surely would bruise him! ;) Hermione won!