
9/25/2016 c1
4Fluffering
I doubt that this story will get updated — after all, it's been six years — but really, I'm inclined to say this sole chapter is timeless. You did great in developing their relationship over the years, although there are several canon deviations that have yet to be explained — had Shinichi ever meet Ran, Heiji, Ai, etc? — so it'll be interesting to see the plot you had in mind.
It's a nice prologue/first chapter, and can stand upright by itself.

I doubt that this story will get updated — after all, it's been six years — but really, I'm inclined to say this sole chapter is timeless. You did great in developing their relationship over the years, although there are several canon deviations that have yet to be explained — had Shinichi ever meet Ran, Heiji, Ai, etc? — so it'll be interesting to see the plot you had in mind.
It's a nice prologue/first chapter, and can stand upright by itself.
3/12/2016 c1 lulu
This is sooooo good! Please update soon.
This is sooooo good! Please update soon.
8/21/2015 c1
5Shana-Fujioka
This story is really cute. I hope you will someday write more for it, because I wonder how Kaito will make Shinichi fall for him. :3

This story is really cute. I hope you will someday write more for it, because I wonder how Kaito will make Shinichi fall for him. :3
8/11/2012 c1
12sakura240
Kura: KAITO, GANBATTE! XD
Berry: silly shinichi...
Kura: Is this a one-shot? or is there more? Oh, I hope there's more! XD Please let there be more! XD
Berry: :)

Kura: KAITO, GANBATTE! XD
Berry: silly shinichi...
Kura: Is this a one-shot? or is there more? Oh, I hope there's more! XD Please let there be more! XD
Berry: :)
11/2/2011 c1
3DayDreaming0f y0u
You should continue because this is breaking my heart. Shinichi needs to know how Kaito feels before it's too late or something tragic happens, which would mean it's too late. I love Kaito and Shinichi! So many things can happen at the amusement park.

You should continue because this is breaking my heart. Shinichi needs to know how Kaito feels before it's too late or something tragic happens, which would mean it's too late. I love Kaito and Shinichi! So many things can happen at the amusement park.
10/13/2011 c1
11Kaida-14Kage
Wow this is great so far. Will you update it? Or is it abandoned?
Poor Kaito-Shinichi is too oblivious XD Loved that first meeting with Kaito and Shinichi-"Do we get to bring him home with us?" I laughed so much cause of that.
And yay no Black Orgaization! Do they get to live somewhat regular lives? (As in no shrinking?) I mean I doubt you can call living with Kaitou KID regular...
Anywyas please update it?

Wow this is great so far. Will you update it? Or is it abandoned?
Poor Kaito-Shinichi is too oblivious XD Loved that first meeting with Kaito and Shinichi-"Do we get to bring him home with us?" I laughed so much cause of that.
And yay no Black Orgaization! Do they get to live somewhat regular lives? (As in no shrinking?) I mean I doubt you can call living with Kaitou KID regular...
Anywyas please update it?
2/18/2011 c1
3TangerineTea
This is an interesting take on the canon Kaito-Shinichi dynamic, and I'd like to see it expanded further :3 I can never get enough of determined!Kaito trying desperately to woo oblivious!Shinichi. It's such a fun setup X) Please keep writing!

This is an interesting take on the canon Kaito-Shinichi dynamic, and I'd like to see it expanded further :3 I can never get enough of determined!Kaito trying desperately to woo oblivious!Shinichi. It's such a fun setup X) Please keep writing!