
12/24/2016 c15 Guest
This was very well written, the story flowed very well, my only problem was the length, i felt it was too short, some aspects of the sory were rushed, but overall 9/10
This was very well written, the story flowed very well, my only problem was the length, i felt it was too short, some aspects of the sory were rushed, but overall 9/10
7/31/2013 c15 Guest
no offense, but yuuki means courage
no offense, but yuuki means courage
10/31/2012 c15 Guest
Chapter 16
Chapter 16
1/10/2011 c14 SnapeisLoyal
A sequel sounds awesome! The details in this chapter were good too. You're writing has gotten better. :)
A sequel sounds awesome! The details in this chapter were good too. You're writing has gotten better. :)
1/10/2011 c12 SnapeisLoyal
Akiza needs to tel Carly what really happened. But yay for them getting back together! Love YuseiXAkiza!
Akiza needs to tel Carly what really happened. But yay for them getting back together! Love YuseiXAkiza!
1/10/2011 c11 SnapeisLoyal
this chapter was good and the preview looked interesting. i can't wait to read it! Loves!
this chapter was good and the preview looked interesting. i can't wait to read it! Loves!
1/10/2011 c10 SnapeisLoyal
Wow, i teared up for this. How could Yusei even THINK about leaving her? i dont care what anyone says! Run back to her now!
Wow, i teared up for this. How could Yusei even THINK about leaving her? i dont care what anyone says! Run back to her now!
1/10/2011 c8 SnapeisLoyal
Yay! They kissed! FINALLY! And you did good with the duel scene too. I'm not good at those but you did it well. :)
Yay! They kissed! FINALLY! And you did good with the duel scene too. I'm not good at those but you did it well. :)
1/10/2011 c7 SnapeisLoyal
Mandy is NOT a good friend. Grr...
But loved this chapter as well!
*runs to next chapter*
Mandy is NOT a good friend. Grr...
But loved this chapter as well!
*runs to next chapter*