for IchixRuki Fade to black: When the Moon Vanish5/20/2014 c6 
2Hekka
Wow! It becomes more and more interesting. Who watches Ishidf? And how they are connected with Rukia's strange "admirer"?
2HekkaWow! It becomes more and more interesting. Who watches Ishidf? And how they are connected with Rukia's strange "admirer"?
12/6/2012 c1 12Rouge-Impulstice1
Aweee so cute! , Even though I haven't seen much of bleach, i still love this pair better than Orhime with ichi x3. Very cute:D
12Rouge-Impulstice1Aweee so cute! , Even though I haven't seen much of bleach, i still love this pair better than Orhime with ichi x3. Very cute:D
5/26/2012 c1 Cheese Fish Burger
Draw manga
It not that hard if you a manga drawing book and if you draw manga everyday
Draw manga
It not that hard if you a manga drawing book and if you draw manga everyday
7/10/2011 c6 3Winter Knight
That's good I just read all six chapters and it is interesting, keep up the good work
3Winter KnightThat's good I just read all six chapters and it is interesting, keep up the good work
5/2/2011 c6 7darklover
Glad you updated. I liked the interaction between Ishida and Inoue. They would make such a cute couple if only Inoue would get over Ichigo. I wonder who those mysterious people are.
About the manga, I really miss Rukia and Ichigo's Shinigami powers. Kubo is just dragging out the story by adding Fullbring. I think he could have dealt with the Aizen fight differently without Ichigo losing his powers and instead creating an arc dedidcated to tying up loose ends. I can't stand the idea of waiting for ten years until Bleach ends (Apparently, Kubo has said he'll take another 10 years). It looks like Kubo just wants to make more money. Bleach needs to end because it's the only we'll get IchiRuki. Atleast, I'm hoping we will.
7darkloverGlad you updated. I liked the interaction between Ishida and Inoue. They would make such a cute couple if only Inoue would get over Ichigo. I wonder who those mysterious people are.
About the manga, I really miss Rukia and Ichigo's Shinigami powers. Kubo is just dragging out the story by adding Fullbring. I think he could have dealt with the Aizen fight differently without Ichigo losing his powers and instead creating an arc dedidcated to tying up loose ends. I can't stand the idea of waiting for ten years until Bleach ends (Apparently, Kubo has said he'll take another 10 years). It looks like Kubo just wants to make more money. Bleach needs to end because it's the only we'll get IchiRuki. Atleast, I'm hoping we will.
1/18/2011 c5 darklover
Well, I hope to see the next update as well as read you're new story. I'm close to updating Ascension. Probably this week...And I also have art, Masaki's sword that I will be posting.
Well, I hope to see the next update as well as read you're new story. I'm close to updating Ascension. Probably this week...And I also have art, Masaki's sword that I will be posting.
1/7/2011 c4 darklover
Not a boring chapter at all. Looks like Urahara might have a clue on what's going on. The hint he gave Yoruichi was really interesting. I can't wait to find out why that senkaimon reacting the way it did has to do with Ichigo/Rukia's history.
As far as getting a beta, in case you still don't have one, since you seem to have gotten one through deviant art. At the top of this site there is the option of beta readers, just click the category of story you're writing and look through the profiles of the beta readers and send a pm to the one you like to see if they're willing to beta for you.
Til next time,
darklover
Not a boring chapter at all. Looks like Urahara might have a clue on what's going on. The hint he gave Yoruichi was really interesting. I can't wait to find out why that senkaimon reacting the way it did has to do with Ichigo/Rukia's history.
As far as getting a beta, in case you still don't have one, since you seem to have gotten one through deviant art. At the top of this site there is the option of beta readers, just click the category of story you're writing and look through the profiles of the beta readers and send a pm to the one you like to see if they're willing to beta for you.
Til next time,
darklover
1/7/2011 c4 LinG08
well, the story is getting more interesting...the mystery lies to Rukia right? is she somewhat a important on the storyline? i bet she is powerful...waaaa i can't wait till that time comes!
well, the story is getting more interesting...the mystery lies to Rukia right? is she somewhat a important on the storyline? i bet she is powerful...waaaa i can't wait till that time comes!
12/29/2010 c3 darklover
This chapter was interesting. Definitely interested to find out who Rukia's secret admirer is. As for the grammar, a beta could always help you.
This chapter was interesting. Definitely interested to find out who Rukia's secret admirer is. As for the grammar, a beta could always help you.
12/29/2010 c3 LinG08
hey falcon! i loved your story plot! i'm a huge fan of Rukia! and yeah ichiruki too! please update again :) this story deserves more reviews..
hey falcon! i loved your story plot! i'm a huge fan of Rukia! and yeah ichiruki too! please update again :) this story deserves more reviews..
10/15/2010 c1 5Writing with my phase
Hey there!
I just felt like I would review this story you wrote since you reviewed mine so many times
I really like it you should try to make more fanfics i like mostly any type of fan fics.
But yeah just update please!~
5Writing with my phaseHey there!
I just felt like I would review this story you wrote since you reviewed mine so many times
I really like it you should try to make more fanfics i like mostly any type of fan fics.
But yeah just update please!~