
8/14/2010 c1
11CurrentCurrant
Ash Yellow? I'm confused, but keep going anyway! I want to see how this turns out.

Ash Yellow? I'm confused, but keep going anyway! I want to see how this turns out.
6/21/2010 c1
1Shebajay
Hmm... this looks like a good plot so far. I look forward to seeing where you take it from here. I hope you are able to update soon.

Hmm... this looks like a good plot so far. I look forward to seeing where you take it from here. I hope you are able to update soon.
6/11/2010 c1
122Netbug-Archive
Huh, interesting idea. Just make sure to watch your spelling and grammar tho; spell check doesn't get everything, and some sentences felt like run ons.

Huh, interesting idea. Just make sure to watch your spelling and grammar tho; spell check doesn't get everything, and some sentences felt like run ons.