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7/16/2012 c1 Rai-Kaze1
What the hell is "clesha", if you don't mind my asking? Do you happen to mean "cliché"? Have you ever heard of grammar and punctuation? I'm sure this would be a decent story if I could actually understand what you were saying. There is this little invention called the comma. You should try it sometime. Many of your sentences are run-on and I honestly don't know how you've made it this far in life.
1/14/2012 c1 4TheatreGeek98
I'm pretty sure this a troll, keep up the bad work.
7/25/2010 c1 1ih8h8rs
duuude tis isn't even a fanfiction i should report you! but i won't, i guess...
7/22/2010 c2 fish
there is an eggplant right behind you
7/17/2010 c1 a flamer
Uhhh...sooooooo, you really really need to just totally rewrite it cuz I could not read a word of that.
6/16/2010 c2 4CyanideMangoOfMassDestruction
You diefinitly need to fix spelling and grammar and stuff. But keep updating!
6/15/2010 c1 butterfinger
Good start. Is there more than two chapters? Before letting a teacher see it, check your spelling. I enjoyed it and admire your imagination. Keep up the good work.

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