for Belated Introductions2/16/2012 c1 Jimmy Goldeneyes
Nice, I can totally see that conversation going that way in the beginning.
Nice, I can totally see that conversation going that way in the beginning.
10/9/2011 c1 
22Wintermoth
...He never did introduce himself in the Game...did he? Huh.
But Cinna says it right after she first sees him on the Prima Vista...
Oh well. This was cute.
22Wintermoth...He never did introduce himself in the Game...did he? Huh.
But Cinna says it right after she first sees him on the Prima Vista...
Oh well. This was cute.
9/12/2010 c1 18Ersatz.Love
I liked this! Short and sweet and full of character, and stylistically flawless. Well, almost - there was one little line I tripped over: "Only thing I tripped over was "you have alluded to any form of introduction…" I think what you meant here was 'you have eluded any form of introduction,' since 'alluding to' means to call attention to something (as in, an allusion) whereas 'eluded' means escaped, which makes more sense there. But that's a minor, forgivable thing; it just stands out a little more since the story is so short. That aside, this was brilliant!
18Ersatz.LoveI liked this! Short and sweet and full of character, and stylistically flawless. Well, almost - there was one little line I tripped over: "Only thing I tripped over was "you have alluded to any form of introduction…" I think what you meant here was 'you have eluded any form of introduction,' since 'alluding to' means to call attention to something (as in, an allusion) whereas 'eluded' means escaped, which makes more sense there. But that's a minor, forgivable thing; it just stands out a little more since the story is so short. That aside, this was brilliant!
7/11/2010 c1 8JordanMathias
Its funny, I totally see this happening! Especially Garnet and Steiner slightly judging Zidane! I like the description you used here, especially with Vivi! Great job! I think you've become my favorite author on here!
8JordanMathiasIts funny, I totally see this happening! Especially Garnet and Steiner slightly judging Zidane! I like the description you used here, especially with Vivi! Great job! I think you've become my favorite author on here!
6/18/2010 c1 16Myshu
Eheheh, I love the drawling way Zidane answers at first, and the way he toes the line between flirting and insult. Very cute drabble, miss.
16MyshuEheheh, I love the drawling way Zidane answers at first, and the way he toes the line between flirting and insult. Very cute drabble, miss.
6/16/2010 c1 1ashbazell
I thought this story was lovely. I'm playing with the idea of getting back into fanfiction at the moment...this story was definitely a bit of encouragement. :) very well written, short, but with enough in it to say a lot about both Zidane and Garnet.
only thing though: when Garnet is mentioning that Zidane never introduced himself...she says that he alluded to any form of introduction...? that doesn't really say what i think u want it to say. to allude to something is to hint at something. so maybe you meant that he eluded the introduction ? meaning that he went around it, or avoided it ? i don't know. i don't like to be nit-picky. but it caught my attention.
other than that, i loved it ! 5 stars, 3 hearts, and all that. :D
1ashbazellI thought this story was lovely. I'm playing with the idea of getting back into fanfiction at the moment...this story was definitely a bit of encouragement. :) very well written, short, but with enough in it to say a lot about both Zidane and Garnet.
only thing though: when Garnet is mentioning that Zidane never introduced himself...she says that he alluded to any form of introduction...? that doesn't really say what i think u want it to say. to allude to something is to hint at something. so maybe you meant that he eluded the introduction ? meaning that he went around it, or avoided it ? i don't know. i don't like to be nit-picky. but it caught my attention.
other than that, i loved it ! 5 stars, 3 hearts, and all that. :D
6/15/2010 c1 13Green Bunny
Very cute! What's terrible is that I probably would have replied with "ditto" too. LOL! That was a cute little piece.
13Green BunnyVery cute! What's terrible is that I probably would have replied with "ditto" too. LOL! That was a cute little piece.
6/15/2010 c1 23Princess Serena til Universo
This Is a very cute one shot. It made me laugh. I had always thought Garnet would do something like that and Zidane was perfict. Good Job!
~Princess Serena til Universo~
23Princess Serena til UniversoThis Is a very cute one shot. It made me laugh. I had always thought Garnet would do something like that and Zidane was perfict. Good Job!
~Princess Serena til Universo~
6/14/2010 c1 10colorfulCheshire
Quite short, but cute and refreshing. As always, you paint the world of Gaia in such a natural way that I can see the cutscenes (I'm a bit odd like that, sometimes). I love the little in-game fics; they just add to the experience of IX.
10colorfulCheshireQuite short, but cute and refreshing. As always, you paint the world of Gaia in such a natural way that I can see the cutscenes (I'm a bit odd like that, sometimes). I love the little in-game fics; they just add to the experience of IX.