for the new hokage10/15/2011 c5 
5RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga
lol i love this story please update when you get the chance please.
5RoyalPrincessHinataHyugalol i love this story please update when you get the chance please.
7/11/2011 c5 Stop writing
Ehhhh
You still suck...
Just stop writing
Ehhhh
You still suck...
Just stop writing
10/7/2010 c5 5EvilFlower
It's great that you're writing again. And may I say that it was worth the wait? I love the giant Choji bit.
5EvilFlowerIt's great that you're writing again. And may I say that it was worth the wait? I love the giant Choji bit.
10/6/2010 c5 WaterGoshhh
Hey! i love it! 3 i really do keep up the good work~
Hey! i love it! 3 i really do keep up the good work~
8/9/2010 c4 blarg
I like the idea, all that needs work is the way it is written
I like the idea, all that needs work is the way it is written
8/7/2010 c4 EvilFlower
I like your story, so dont stop. dont listen to them, they dont know anything. please continue. those guys who are flaming you are dicks/bitches.
I like your story, so dont stop. dont listen to them, they dont know anything. please continue. those guys who are flaming you are dicks/bitches.
7/29/2010 c3 18The Unknown Twinkie
Dude you really need to plan out your story because it looks like you are just making it up as you go, so stop typing it and plan it out first then write it.
18The Unknown TwinkieDude you really need to plan out your story because it looks like you are just making it up as you go, so stop typing it and plan it out first then write it.
7/29/2010 c1 5Advent of Shadows
There is this amazing thing called grammar. You should try to use it. If you would, reading this might be slightly better than poking my eyes out with a rusty spoon.
5Advent of ShadowsThere is this amazing thing called grammar. You should try to use it. If you would, reading this might be slightly better than poking my eyes out with a rusty spoon.
6/21/2010 c2 18The Unknown Twinkie
Hmmmm...maybe...maybe...I'll have to wait to see if it's a good story or not.
18The Unknown TwinkieHmmmm...maybe...maybe...I'll have to wait to see if it's a good story or not.