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8/3/2020 c1 25Miriam1
I hadn't seen this before. While it's not the way Ms. Rowling imagined him, it is a very realistic reaction to what Harry has been told, and what is expected from him.

This was very well done.

If you leave it as it is, it is fine. If you decide to follow it up, that would be interesting. I offer no pressure, either way.

I like what you've done, and it works. Well done.

Sincerely,
Miriam
11/7/2012 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
Very well written.
6/16/2010 c1 7My Solitude
This is really interesting. I don't think there were any mistakes.

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