for An Unreal Reunion9/22/2018 c4 
2Princesswolfhunter
The funny thing is frying pans are a girl's best friend. Also the best weapon to have during a zombie apocalypse too. My favorite line would be, "let's see if I can get a home run with buddy old pal here's head."
But other than that, this book is too good. I have wheezing laughs on the funniest of parts. Keep this style of writing, never change it, my friend.
2PrincesswolfhunterThe funny thing is frying pans are a girl's best friend. Also the best weapon to have during a zombie apocalypse too. My favorite line would be, "let's see if I can get a home run with buddy old pal here's head."
But other than that, this book is too good. I have wheezing laughs on the funniest of parts. Keep this style of writing, never change it, my friend.
8/28/2017 c5 EdwardClowny
I love this story. I really do ,but Cara is a little over dramatic. Love it otherwise. Keep up the writing, it is gorgeous. ! ;p
I love this story. I really do ,but Cara is a little over dramatic. Love it otherwise. Keep up the writing, it is gorgeous. ! ;p
4/12/2017 c34 16tay
Best story evah but there was a lot of coming up behind me and cuddling what about some little heated scenes or some funny moments but overall great story definitely in my top 3.
Best story evah but there was a lot of coming up behind me and cuddling what about some little heated scenes or some funny moments but overall great story definitely in my top 3.
2/20/2017 c3 1AkaneHeartfeila
I love reading stories with Scottish characters, being Scottish myself. The story is really good so far x
1AkaneHeartfeilaI love reading stories with Scottish characters, being Scottish myself. The story is really good so far x
11/20/2015 c5 jane
You are a good storyteller but please..."you're beautiful face"?..."how's you're arm?".
You're you are. The word you want is "your".
Please don't spoil a promising writing talent by making very basic grammatical errors. So many young writers think it doesn't matter. It does. It's very off-putting. Perhaps a beta who understands grammar will help. I don't say this to be mean. Reviews need to be honest.
You are a good storyteller but please..."you're beautiful face"?..."how's you're arm?".
You're you are. The word you want is "your".
Please don't spoil a promising writing talent by making very basic grammatical errors. So many young writers think it doesn't matter. It does. It's very off-putting. Perhaps a beta who understands grammar will help. I don't say this to be mean. Reviews need to be honest.
6/30/2015 c2 Aliyah kamara
Lone it so far
Lone it so far
6/21/2015 c19 johnson11
i love your story, hope you make everything right in the end .
i love your story, hope you make everything right in the end .
12/3/2014 c34 wolf-girl-only-in-my-dreams
I really loved it. I think at some parts was a lil rushed. But still good. And I'm gonna read the other version.
I really loved it. I think at some parts was a lil rushed. But still good. And I'm gonna read the other version.
7/14/2014 c7 cma
the review button isent sexy but ill press it anyway also keeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing
the review button isent sexy but ill press it anyway also keeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing
1/31/2014 c33 2Moonlight Cosmic Angel
it was a very good story i loved it. but what vampire effects did she get?
2Moonlight Cosmic Angelit was a very good story i loved it. but what vampire effects did she get?