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1/21/2014 c6 29CatLover444
Very Sweet!
7/20/2013 c6 5Mystical Aquafina
This story is so cute .. I loved it !

Mystical Aquafina
7/8/2011 c6 Ryuketsu no Hana
me encanto ;3
2/13/2011 c1 AnnaBananaKooKooCake
So... THIS is your first story... pretty good dude. :D
2/10/2011 c4 24ObsessedwReading
:D This is really good! You are an great author. i love all of your fanfics.
2/10/2011 c3 ObsessedwReading
I really hope Yusei and Akiza get together in the show.
2/10/2011 c2 ObsessedwReading
Good
2/10/2011 c1 ObsessedwReading
I Love this so far. Good job on this! :)
8/19/2010 c6 8Bulletprccf
Okay, first: Oh. Mein. Gott. Are you REALLY twelve? This is amazing! Not to brush twelve-year-olds; I was one once, too. But WOW; I could write at twelve, but not this well [I think-my stories were all written when I was twelve to thirteen]. This is really nice. I'm honestly surprised that it doesn't have more reviews.

But a piece of advice? Next time you write a multiple-chapter story, try adding a thicker plot. Most people will read a multi-chapter story if there is more of a plot, not just a romantic get-together. I'm not flaming, no way; I hate flamers, too. Just trying to tactfully [not sure if it's working. ^sigh^ darn bluntness] give advice.

Please write another! I look forward to reading you again!

-Sennen
8/2/2010 c6 end28
Nice job with this story:D I love it:D Goooooo Faithshipping:D
7/2/2010 c6 2MoonlightLotus18
This story is good so far! And you're only eleven? When I was eleven my stories were downright disastrous. You've got a lot of talent for an eleven soon to be twelve year old. Keep it up!
6/30/2010 c5 7DinosaursgoRawr101
Good job! I enjoyed it
6/30/2010 c5 21Cosmic Guardian
good story. your starting a lot better then I did.
6/30/2010 c1 13narusakufan1985
This is a good story. Please continue. Yusei and Aki forever.
6/30/2010 c5 2RunoandAkizafan
LOVE IT! CAN"T WAIT UNTIL NEXT TIME!:)
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