for A Sparkling Day3/27 c6 Guest
IT’s perfect so beautiful
IT’s perfect so beautiful
2/10/2011 c4 
24ObsessedwReading
:D This is really good! You are an great author. i love all of your fanfics.
24ObsessedwReading:D This is really good! You are an great author. i love all of your fanfics.
8/19/2010 c6 8Bulletprccf
Okay, first: Oh. Mein. Gott. Are you REALLY twelve? This is amazing! Not to brush twelve-year-olds; I was one once, too. But WOW; I could write at twelve, but not this well [I think-my stories were all written when I was twelve to thirteen]. This is really nice. I'm honestly surprised that it doesn't have more reviews.
But a piece of advice? Next time you write a multiple-chapter story, try adding a thicker plot. Most people will read a multi-chapter story if there is more of a plot, not just a romantic get-together. I'm not flaming, no way; I hate flamers, too. Just trying to tactfully [not sure if it's working. ^sigh^ darn bluntness] give advice.
Please write another! I look forward to reading you again!
-Sennen
8BulletprccfOkay, first: Oh. Mein. Gott. Are you REALLY twelve? This is amazing! Not to brush twelve-year-olds; I was one once, too. But WOW; I could write at twelve, but not this well [I think-my stories were all written when I was twelve to thirteen]. This is really nice. I'm honestly surprised that it doesn't have more reviews.
But a piece of advice? Next time you write a multiple-chapter story, try adding a thicker plot. Most people will read a multi-chapter story if there is more of a plot, not just a romantic get-together. I'm not flaming, no way; I hate flamers, too. Just trying to tactfully [not sure if it's working. ^sigh^ darn bluntness] give advice.
Please write another! I look forward to reading you again!
-Sennen
7/2/2010 c6 2MoonlightLotus18
This story is good so far! And you're only eleven? When I was eleven my stories were downright disastrous. You've got a lot of talent for an eleven soon to be twelve year old. Keep it up!
2MoonlightLotus18This story is good so far! And you're only eleven? When I was eleven my stories were downright disastrous. You've got a lot of talent for an eleven soon to be twelve year old. Keep it up!