for She's back6/11/2013 c1 Guest
U r a bad person...this was the best will and caleb story I've ever read and u never finished it so I'm very upset with u...please finish it
U r a bad person...this was the best will and caleb story I've ever read and u never finished it so I'm very upset with u...please finish it
12/23/2012 c4 
2Archeron28
this is awesome, the best WITCh fanfic i have read so far u have to keep writing !
2Archeron28this is awesome, the best WITCh fanfic i have read so far u have to keep writing !
12/1/2011 c3 3Detective Otaku 1412
For some reason I can't review chapter four, so I'll say this here. I really like this story and I hope that you update soon. It's really god and your a good writer.
3Detective Otaku 1412For some reason I can't review chapter four, so I'll say this here. I really like this story and I hope that you update soon. It's really god and your a good writer.
12/29/2010 c4 636yellow 14
Try to keep Elyon IN character. I would hat to see this promising fic turn bad because you can't stop bashing her character.
636yellow 14Try to keep Elyon IN character. I would hat to see this promising fic turn bad because you can't stop bashing her character.
12/29/2010 c4 4Princess Mew Mew
Cool! I've been waiting for this one!
So, will it be long before the next chapter comes up?
Plus I loved the stuff between Will and Caleb.
Please update soon!
4Princess Mew MewCool! I've been waiting for this one!
So, will it be long before the next chapter comes up?
Plus I loved the stuff between Will and Caleb.
Please update soon!
12/29/2010 c4 Kalims
Really good chapter! But I'm surprised Elyon would act like that.. And as for Caleb and Will then it seems like the flame is finllay starting!
Nice work, Can't wait for the next chapter!
Really good chapter! But I'm surprised Elyon would act like that.. And as for Caleb and Will then it seems like the flame is finllay starting!
Nice work, Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/31/2010 c3 4Princess Mew Mew
More please! I can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope you update soon!
4Princess Mew MewMore please! I can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope you update soon!
8/27/2010 c3 636yellow 14
AN mid-story is a no-no. A fairly good chapter, keep updating. Let's see what happens next.
636yellow 14AN mid-story is a no-no. A fairly good chapter, keep updating. Let's see what happens next.