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12/19/2012 c1 oo
i hope you get cancer
7/4/2010 c1 LuckyShadowWolf
So far looking good, although would be better if longer.
6/18/2010 c1 10TeiggyBear
Hmm, I not quite sure what to say about the story.

It looks like it does have quite some potential.

The mannerism is good and the general Idea is great, but

I think you need to work on how you word it, and the length.

So please continue, I look forward to your imagination :P
6/17/2010 c1 6TamaliaDuckiiLilMizRaynCloud
Few mistakes but otherwise great, will you make up a name or just make someone whisper the doctors name into his ear but not say what was said?

oh and if you need/want a beta reader then talk to Teiggybear and she soooooo mean and nasty! nah im kidding she is nice to her 'clients' so she calls them :)

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