for Beginning a New Path6/16/2024 c3 Soul Sendant
you pathetic rapist trash that wrote and read this should die slow painful deaths as thats all trash deserves.
you pathetic rapist trash that wrote and read this should die slow painful deaths as thats all trash deserves.
4/19/2024 c94 Guest
Eh... alternate Cordy taking over Kyra was honestly unnecessary...
Like there was really no point in doing that, and ruined the whole "Harry is attracted to this girl but now his alternate selves wife decided to fuck with it"
Eh... alternate Cordy taking over Kyra was honestly unnecessary...
Like there was really no point in doing that, and ruined the whole "Harry is attracted to this girl but now his alternate selves wife decided to fuck with it"
3/11/2024 c65 
9K. M. Donovan
just a thought, for some of the bigger arcs, like the voyager arc, you should look into separating them into their own standalone stories. so they are easier to find.
i find myself frequently coming back to this to read a single arc, given how disconnected they can be. they each act as a stand alone fic.
anyways, just a thought to consider.
and as always
thank you for your time.
9K. M. Donovanjust a thought, for some of the bigger arcs, like the voyager arc, you should look into separating them into their own standalone stories. so they are easier to find.
i find myself frequently coming back to this to read a single arc, given how disconnected they can be. they each act as a stand alone fic.
anyways, just a thought to consider.
and as always
thank you for your time.
2/1/2024 c1 mattzem6
Your writing style reads like a story outline with the occasional dialogue. Also, I am not sure If I read this wrong but I think Harry is supposed to be 18 or 19 in this story so far and High School freshmen are like 13-14 years old, kind of creepy on Harry's part if he's that old and going after someone so young.
Your writing style reads like a story outline with the occasional dialogue. Also, I am not sure If I read this wrong but I think Harry is supposed to be 18 or 19 in this story so far and High School freshmen are like 13-14 years old, kind of creepy on Harry's part if he's that old and going after someone so young.