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7/28/2012 c7 KrnYong
Wow, this is good... I only hope it's not really over! You haven't u
10/15/2010 c7 teenvid201
That is some freaky coincidence that you start a supernaturally based Red dead Redemption and then the undead nightmare DLC comes out. Honestly don't care if it was intentional or not, just hope that it encourages you to keep going with this story. Good stuff so far, great idea to "trim the fat" of the RDR story, wasn't exactly thrilled with the idea reading a transcript of the game, so good job keeping things relevant to your theme. Like the twist into Bonnie and the Marshalls characters, also... you know what? It's just awesome, it's all just awesome... so uh... keep doing it... please?
8/28/2010 c1 1freezeazy
I knew there was something off about that old man!

"I should have known...God damn zombies...again!" John muttered as he pulled out his sawed-off shotgun.

How is that not funny? xD
8/26/2010 c7 undeadyeti
These songs might help inspire your creativety.

Undead west by Knock Galley West

As we ride by Knock Galley West

God's gonna cut you down by Johnny Cash

I'd also reccomend reading the Dark tower series by Stephen King.
8/25/2010 c4 undeadyeti
Ah Lovecraftian horror mixed with wild west gunplay what could possibly go wrong.
8/15/2010 c6 12The-Goldstein-Sharpshooter
Wow, I usually do not like AU, but this is a very interesting take on Red Dead Redemption! I'm favouriting this, and I hope that you'll finish it! It's got great promise storyline wise!

BTW, hope you don't mind, but you've inspired me to write a supernatural AU verse of RDR as well! It'll be somewhat diff from yours, and it follows a different plot sometime before Mexico. Hope you don't mind. I'm just waiting for my newbie prohibitation on story uploading to run out. =P
8/7/2010 c6 5Sleeps in Rain
You finally updated. And as expected, I wasn't disappointed. Still love how you incorporate actual dialogue into the story, quite flawlessly at that. I especially liked the end of this chapter when Bonnie privately read John's cards and apparently foresaw something. Now that I have any clue what "The Fool" and "The Tower" actually represent... :P

Can't wait to see how this begins to unfold as the plot thickens!
8/5/2010 c6 9txrockgirl
I love how creative you are with this story. Lots of originality. Keep up the awesome work!
8/4/2010 c5 SonicDude87
Ahh. Supernatural forces at work! So that's why there are so many bloodthirsty cougars and wolves in RDR! It makes perfect sense! XD

Doin' a good job on your story, Motordog.
8/1/2010 c5 iamTheHood
this is a trippy story dude...but its good...im almost scared to read the rest once its posted...
7/6/2010 c5 5Sleeps in Rain
I really like how you worked the actual in-game dialogue into this chapter, very good job. Now I'm just waiting for Bonnie to show up to see what interesting stuff you can come up with for her :)
7/1/2010 c4 Sleeps in Rain
Whoa...ok THIS was a good chapter! Very well written, albeit a little disturbing what with the gore and demonic possession...actually I feel like a bit of a hypocrite reading this considering my distaste for much of the occult but the story concept is too good to pass up...especially if it's RDR :P

I'll be waiting for the next installment.
6/30/2010 c3 Sleeps in Rain
Hmm..I have to be honest, this chapter felt a little...rushed to me. Maybe that wasn't the case, but still. I feel the word choice was a little dull this time around, unlike the previous two chapters, which flowed quite smoothly. All in all though, I did get the point that was trying to be conveyed, and the "listen to the chicken!" part did make me laugh :P

Well, I can't wait to see John begin his supernatural journey to find Williamson and whoever else the Ram decides to sic him on. It's now 1:20 am though, so I will read the next chapter when I'm less sleepy. Take care for now :)
6/27/2010 c3 4Samu
The brand I find to be very interesting. I'm wondering if this will be a big factor in the future...
6/25/2010 c2 Samu
Marston would be a really good supernatural slayer, but then again, he's pretty good at slaying anything. I'm excited to see where this goes!
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