for Tales From the Quidditch Pitch9/17/2010 c2 
11Celina Corey
Hmmm...James and Lily, slightly before she accepted she was in love with him? Great idea, yes? ;]
11Celina CoreyHmmm...James and Lily, slightly before she accepted she was in love with him? Great idea, yes? ;]
9/9/2010 c1 MysteriousAnonymous
Hi.
1st of all, i loved it. SO MUCH. both chapters were reaalllly good!
2nd, i say Oliver wood/ anyone, his name definitely hints something, right? *wink*
Hi.
1st of all, i loved it. SO MUCH. both chapters were reaalllly good!
2nd, i say Oliver wood/ anyone, his name definitely hints something, right? *wink*
9/9/2010 c1 Lovey-dovey 21
LOOOOVE THE DRAMIONE CHAPTER :P
my fav pairing would be dramione the normal one
then if slash drarry- draco and harry :P
ooo femmslash cho n hermione is not bad ;]
happy writing :D
i hope u actually write some of those pairing smuts ;]
awesome job though~ :D
LOOOOVE THE DRAMIONE CHAPTER :P
my fav pairing would be dramione the normal one
then if slash drarry- draco and harry :P
ooo femmslash cho n hermione is not bad ;]
happy writing :D
i hope u actually write some of those pairing smuts ;]
awesome job though~ :D
9/7/2010 c2 Keesha
Wow that was hot, sext, steaming...any word ya wanna use. Oh a Dramione is already done but a Blaise/Someone would be awesome. No one can resist some sexy Italians!
Wow that was hot, sext, steaming...any word ya wanna use. Oh a Dramione is already done but a Blaise/Someone would be awesome. No one can resist some sexy Italians!
9/7/2010 c2 4chaosprincess123
I absolutely love this :)
What about a Fred/Hermione? I'd really enjoy a story with those two :)
4chaosprincess123I absolutely love this :)
What about a Fred/Hermione? I'd really enjoy a story with those two :)
9/6/2010 c2 ash
Oh, Brad. I swear you and Amanda are the perfect pair solely because you're both awesome writers :) Your chapters never disappoint. Keep up the awesome work. I already told you but I'll tell you again: You should write a Cho/someone. I think you could have fun with that.
Oh, Brad. I swear you and Amanda are the perfect pair solely because you're both awesome writers :) Your chapters never disappoint. Keep up the awesome work. I already told you but I'll tell you again: You should write a Cho/someone. I think you could have fun with that.
9/6/2010 c2 7medievalruins
Hmm, Harry/Ginny. There's a pairing I've never read before. New experiences all around.
The Quidditch Pitch idea was quite brilliant, if I do say so myself. (Which I did, where's my credit. Nojk.) *ahem*
The only thing is, I wish you would have focused more on the fact that they WERE on a muddy Quidditch Pitch. You know, more details on the dirtiness of it all, etc. But hey, whatever!
I know you're going to say it's the nature of smut, but I found Harry and Ginny to be overwhelmingly out of character. Or maybe Ginny really is that big of a slut, and I'm just giving her too much credit, for whatever bizarre reason. But yeah, I just found her language to be a little too vulgar. Hey, it fit the chapter, though!
Oh, backtracking a little; I love the bit about the itch, and as much as you'll hate it, I'm making a Buffy reference here.
Spike: "I've got a, um, cramp. Buffy was just helping me."
Tara: "A cramp?"
Spike: "That's right."
Tara: "In your...pants?"
Or it was something along those lines, anyway. Still, it reminded me of that. Hilarious.
Anyway yeah, there was a bit there, and you know which, that was completely unrealistic, but I'm over it. Not a bad go at your first(?) Harry/Ginny.
Looking forward to the next one! (Which may or may not be mine.)
Love always,
Amanda.
7medievalruinsHmm, Harry/Ginny. There's a pairing I've never read before. New experiences all around.
The Quidditch Pitch idea was quite brilliant, if I do say so myself. (Which I did, where's my credit. Nojk.) *ahem*
The only thing is, I wish you would have focused more on the fact that they WERE on a muddy Quidditch Pitch. You know, more details on the dirtiness of it all, etc. But hey, whatever!
I know you're going to say it's the nature of smut, but I found Harry and Ginny to be overwhelmingly out of character. Or maybe Ginny really is that big of a slut, and I'm just giving her too much credit, for whatever bizarre reason. But yeah, I just found her language to be a little too vulgar. Hey, it fit the chapter, though!
Oh, backtracking a little; I love the bit about the itch, and as much as you'll hate it, I'm making a Buffy reference here.
Spike: "I've got a, um, cramp. Buffy was just helping me."
Tara: "A cramp?"
Spike: "That's right."
Tara: "In your...pants?"
Or it was something along those lines, anyway. Still, it reminded me of that. Hilarious.
Anyway yeah, there was a bit there, and you know which, that was completely unrealistic, but I'm over it. Not a bad go at your first(?) Harry/Ginny.
Looking forward to the next one! (Which may or may not be mine.)
Love always,
Amanda.
8/23/2010 c1 Mya
Hello.
First of it all, I want to say THANK YOU for writing this! It absolutely made my day.
I really really like the story. I love the smut, because it's authentic, but not too, well, graphic or anything. It's just the right amount of everything. Plus I adore the idea of Hermione and Draco having hot steamy shower sex after a game of Quidditch.
There is nothing that I don't like about it, I just have to say: continue this series as soon as possible. And I also think you should get a lot more feedback on this. Finding a good Dramione story is not easy these days and you definitely wrote one here!
If I made any mistakes in grammar or spelling, I'm really sorry about it, but I'm from Germany and so, English is not my first language. Hope you were happy about the review anyway.
Keep the good work up!
Mya
Hello.
First of it all, I want to say THANK YOU for writing this! It absolutely made my day.
I really really like the story. I love the smut, because it's authentic, but not too, well, graphic or anything. It's just the right amount of everything. Plus I adore the idea of Hermione and Draco having hot steamy shower sex after a game of Quidditch.
There is nothing that I don't like about it, I just have to say: continue this series as soon as possible. And I also think you should get a lot more feedback on this. Finding a good Dramione story is not easy these days and you definitely wrote one here!
If I made any mistakes in grammar or spelling, I'm really sorry about it, but I'm from Germany and so, English is not my first language. Hope you were happy about the review anyway.
Keep the good work up!
Mya
8/3/2010 c1 SayidaLeFay
Amazing beginning for the series!
How about Draco/Angelina? Werid pairing, I know.
Amazing beginning for the series!
How about Draco/Angelina? Werid pairing, I know.
7/26/2010 c1 Anonymous
wow that one was an interesting pair none the less i like that pair. I am all for "inter-house unity" so why not make one for Blaise/Ginny, Ron/Pansy, Harry/Pansy, perhaps Luna/Blaise those sound okay? or they could be Luna/Harry Ron/Luna or something like that they don't have to involve the Slytherins but people in different houses those seem to be a little more interesting. or maybe Ginny/Cedric (I say he is alive forget the book and movie!)or something like that.Sorry I was ranting again but I hope you will have one of these pairs in consideration :)
wow that one was an interesting pair none the less i like that pair. I am all for "inter-house unity" so why not make one for Blaise/Ginny, Ron/Pansy, Harry/Pansy, perhaps Luna/Blaise those sound okay? or they could be Luna/Harry Ron/Luna or something like that they don't have to involve the Slytherins but people in different houses those seem to be a little more interesting. or maybe Ginny/Cedric (I say he is alive forget the book and movie!)or something like that.Sorry I was ranting again but I hope you will have one of these pairs in consideration :)
7/3/2010 c1 11Amortentia Veritaserum
How bout Cedric and Ginny? Random right? NO one likes Cedric but I think it would be cool.
11Amortentia VeritaserumHow bout Cedric and Ginny? Random right? NO one likes Cedric but I think it would be cool.
6/26/2010 c1 2earthgoddess36
Wow, this was amazing, really and truly. Tres sexy.
could I perhaps suggest for a future chapter Hermione and Sirius? I know he's older, but he was a quidditch player, and a damn good one, and I just can never get me enough of that sexy Mr. Sirius Black. Yum. Thanks!
-Ginger
2earthgoddess36Wow, this was amazing, really and truly. Tres sexy.
could I perhaps suggest for a future chapter Hermione and Sirius? I know he's older, but he was a quidditch player, and a damn good one, and I just can never get me enough of that sexy Mr. Sirius Black. Yum. Thanks!
-Ginger