
1/7/2018 c31 Guest
That was amazing. From chapter 1 I was hooked. I loved it.
That was amazing. From chapter 1 I was hooked. I loved it.
2/8/2017 c2 secretlydatingnatsu
I really like it. There are some errors throughout the chapter but not too bad that I don't know what you're trying to say,
I really like it. There are some errors throughout the chapter but not too bad that I don't know what you're trying to say,
12/21/2016 c31 Zinnia
This was amazing! I loved how you incorporated the danger and action while still keeping the fun parts. This is probably one of the best fics that I have ever read.
This was amazing! I loved how you incorporated the danger and action while still keeping the fun parts. This is probably one of the best fics that I have ever read.
10/5/2016 c31 Guest
Wow! That really was an amazing and well-written story! I especially loved the dynamic between Natsume and Mikan, and you did a great job with the whole Sano problem! Thanks for such an awesome story!
~Breezylyn
Wow! That really was an amazing and well-written story! I especially loved the dynamic between Natsume and Mikan, and you did a great job with the whole Sano problem! Thanks for such an awesome story!
~Breezylyn
8/3/2016 c31 Guest
Ahhhhh! Such an amazing story! I loved it!
Ahhhhh! Such an amazing story! I loved it!
8/3/2016 c30 Guest
OMG, I'm in shock, this is sooo scary. I was about to DIE when Natsume got shot
OMG, I'm in shock, this is sooo scary. I was about to DIE when Natsume got shot
8/3/2016 c27 Guest
This is getting real scary.
This is getting real scary.
9/26/2015 c13 Undertheskys
Mikan's so funny, just by yelling "Because we slept together" she made all girls cry. They all just appear out of nowhere and just randomly take pictures.
Mikan's so funny, just by yelling "Because we slept together" she made all girls cry. They all just appear out of nowhere and just randomly take pictures.
9/12/2015 c16
22IMakeTheMonsters
the beeping machine lol. for a second I thought you meant a machine that makes up insults :P (btw the real name is heart rate monitor)

the beeping machine lol. for a second I thought you meant a machine that makes up insults :P (btw the real name is heart rate monitor)
7/17/2015 c31
2moocow4me
I loved it! That ending was too cute and I'm sorry for my earlier rant! Thank you for all your hard work in completing this story! :D

I loved it! That ending was too cute and I'm sorry for my earlier rant! Thank you for all your hard work in completing this story! :D
7/17/2015 c26 moocow4me
Seriously? You just had to do the the cliché of a coma and memory loss? That upsets me, because I'd been enjoying this story but I hate what's going on right now. Sorry, if this is harsh. But I'm a tad upset at the moment about this. I'll probably leave an apology review at the end of story.
Seriously? You just had to do the the cliché of a coma and memory loss? That upsets me, because I'd been enjoying this story but I hate what's going on right now. Sorry, if this is harsh. But I'm a tad upset at the moment about this. I'll probably leave an apology review at the end of story.