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12/9/2010 c2 1LuckedClover
hey, I REALLY HOPE you continue. i personally think so what if you have ideas close to the same, id love reading two different view. im really quite annoyed by the one who went all diva, cant remember the name. sure, you already know that its alike so theres no real rreason to go all grr. i would/will continue reading it if you had add more. ttfn
10/20/2010 c1 4mysteryrogue29
i havent read the other story, but i dnt like that rogue is kinda... girly i guess in this one talking to kitty like omg! haha but im still reading! update soon
7/24/2010 c2 Pretty-Pagan-Prat
hey what was the one this was based off called? i was readng it a while back and now i cant find it. oh and i'd like to know the authors name too. please i like what you did with it but i was just getting to the good part in the other one
7/8/2010 c2 2TM58
Okay who gives a shit if the story is similiar if you have permision to do it than you can do it. Also about momothestrange's comment it doesnt even mention cody in the first chapter so screw him. love your story hope you continue it.
6/19/2010 c2 15New Dawn Rising
Don't sweat it. I noticed some of the similarities...okay, several, but I'm not gonna flame ya. :) I like Rogue's hair longer too. Don't worry about it. As long as you have her permission, then it's their problem, not yours. It makes me wonder how you will write the boys and I really, really hope that Remy isn't paired with Bella, like he is in the other story. I wanted to scream when I read that (just between you and me).
6/19/2010 c1 moriuh
This story has already been done. And it was written way better. No offense, but you should go take some writing classes.

And okay, I'll take that challenge, if I understand it correctly..5 things you say?

5. Title is either the same or VERY similiar. I forget what the original one was called, but you know, whatever.

4. Lots of LeBeau brothers. At least you were somewhat original and added two others.

3. Rogue 'finally worked up the guts to talk to Cody' and then she had to mlove.

2. Kitty is Rogue's best friend..thought to be honest, they are both HORRIBLY out of character. Rogue's not a drama queen who screams "I HATE YOU" when something goes wrong. And while Kitty is a valley girl, she's intelligent. She doesn't say "OMG." no character, unless they are fucking retarded and peppy and popular, ever says OMG. Oh my god, yes, but NOT OMG. D

1. Rogue is military brat.

And that's all in the first chapter alone..Using a similiar idea with the authors permission is okay..but...same characters, really?
6/19/2010 c2 8Sahara'swildeyes
It sounds fun and so a story gives birth to an idea as long as some things change and you have the go ahead good for you I enjoyed reading hope you continue and never mind the people that can say anything nice...
6/19/2010 c1 1phoenixfire44
Alright, here we go. Yeah, this story does follow the same general idea as YourAlien's, but as long as there are some differences in plot and everything you should be fine. The only thing I can think of that needs some work is that the chapter feels rushed and you don't really explain things. Other than that, I feel that I would enjoy reading this story. Keep writing!
6/19/2010 c1 anna
Very similar? Try complete ripoff.

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