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20Mr. Average
Great staory so far. If you don't mind my saying, please update this if possible. Keep up the good work. Peace
20Mr. AverageGreat staory so far. If you don't mind my saying, please update this if possible. Keep up the good work. Peace
7/7/2010 c4 9yinspirit
Well...That story took an unexpected turn. But keep, writing, I want to see what happens.
9yinspiritWell...That story took an unexpected turn. But keep, writing, I want to see what happens.
7/5/2010 c3 yinspirit
And now, a public sevice announcement from Yinspirit.
*Yin steps up to the podium and clears here throut* Ahem...MORE! That is all.
And now, a public sevice announcement from Yinspirit.
*Yin steps up to the podium and clears here throut* Ahem...MORE! That is all.
6/24/2010 c3 123767
"Mi amor… Te amo! Te amo!" There's something about those words that's just really.. "caliente." Dunno if it's because they're in a foreign language or what, but they're lovely. *melts*
Anyway, I'm still enjoying this! I have to say, Noah being a telepathic lion is a very amusing mental picture. XD
"Mi amor… Te amo! Te amo!" There's something about those words that's just really.. "caliente." Dunno if it's because they're in a foreign language or what, but they're lovely. *melts*
Anyway, I'm still enjoying this! I have to say, Noah being a telepathic lion is a very amusing mental picture. XD
6/21/2010 c2 51Arty d'Arc
I'm a bit confused how this is all going to work out but I LOVE that you tied her name into her mythology and am willing to see where it goes.
51Arty d'ArcI'm a bit confused how this is all going to work out but I LOVE that you tied her name into her mythology and am willing to see where it goes.
6/20/2010 c1 123767
Pretty good so far! I love how Rex is being all hormonal and lovestruck. *snicker* And it's interesting that he doesn't have his powers anymore, so I'm looking forward to reading more about that. :3
The only thing that bugs me is that the dialogue isn't in quotations and isn't in the correct format. It's a little confusing and difficult to read sometimes. (Not meaning to sound harsh or anything. D:)
Pretty good so far! I love how Rex is being all hormonal and lovestruck. *snicker* And it's interesting that he doesn't have his powers anymore, so I'm looking forward to reading more about that. :3
The only thing that bugs me is that the dialogue isn't in quotations and isn't in the correct format. It's a little confusing and difficult to read sometimes. (Not meaning to sound harsh or anything. D:)