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9/26/2020 c1 derekctomlinson
great chapter one hey although naruto/hinata is one of my pairings and ships it's your story i don't support rape either
10/27/2012 c1 Ehlonna the Demoness
more please, i love it.
9/27/2012 c1 1froger495
um ok cant wait for the next chapter.
1/10/2012 c1 2pensuka
well this is veru interesting i wonder what will happen next here
11/17/2011 c1 Cat Eyes In The Night
...i dont even think i need to say it
7/25/2011 c1 rescue 007
this was...bad
11/11/2010 c1 SuNrIsEmAsSacRe
umm could u get a beta so the grammar is better? but otherwise...i like it so far thats my only problem with.
10/18/2010 c1 DragonOfChallenges
dude cant wait for you to update, this will be an epic smut fic, ttfn
10/14/2010 c1 kitfoxgirl
this is a good start i hope you countinu the story
10/3/2010 c1 Korisovra
Don't write anything until you learn the meaning of the words "spelling" and "grammar". Seriously...If you call that imagination, I ask you what crack-pipe/bottle of glue *that* came out of.
7/6/2010 c1 1Graybear32
Not bad although a little short
7/5/2010 c1 1Sage of Asgard
wow, is english even your first language?
6/29/2010 c1 manticore-gurl071134
its an interesting start. There were a few errors, but nothing a beta would not fix. I hope this will be continued.
6/21/2010 c1 Irishfighter
cool start
6/21/2010 c1 1King of the DamnD
i hope you die a horrible death for even thinking of posting this story let alone actually posting it -.-

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