for Rebirthing8/21/2010 c1 
4Nightfire290
Quite enjoyable. I remember this episode, it's one of my favs. To be your first fanfic before "When Worlds Collide," you explained everything nicely. Kudos!
4Nightfire290Quite enjoyable. I remember this episode, it's one of my favs. To be your first fanfic before "When Worlds Collide," you explained everything nicely. Kudos!
7/15/2010 c1 3HeartlessNeoshadow
This is very good for your first fic! It's a very interesting interpretation from a character's point of view that was well written. Only thing is is that I think you could have fleshed out some parts with a bit more detail. Otherwise, this is great. :)
3HeartlessNeoshadowThis is very good for your first fic! It's a very interesting interpretation from a character's point of view that was well written. Only thing is is that I think you could have fleshed out some parts with a bit more detail. Otherwise, this is great. :)
6/30/2010 c1 10Atherin Ashura
very nice Levells! i like how you're more or less making this from Shadow's view point, even though it's still in third person. some might critique you and say that it's just a shortened version of what had happened in the anime, but i like it. you put the focus more on Shadow and his thoughts. can't wait to read the next chapter!
10Atherin Ashuravery nice Levells! i like how you're more or less making this from Shadow's view point, even though it's still in third person. some might critique you and say that it's just a shortened version of what had happened in the anime, but i like it. you put the focus more on Shadow and his thoughts. can't wait to read the next chapter!
6/21/2010 c1 24ShadowRebirth37
This is very very good for your first fanfic, Levells! :3 You did a really good job on Shadow's character. It was a tad on the short side, but hey so was my first fic. ^^; Great work and I hope to see more from you! :3
~Ibeyla ^^
24ShadowRebirth37This is very very good for your first fanfic, Levells! :3 You did a really good job on Shadow's character. It was a tad on the short side, but hey so was my first fic. ^^; Great work and I hope to see more from you! :3
~Ibeyla ^^