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11/8/2010 c2 7Starfishyeti
PLEASE get a beta. I'd love to read this, but I can't get past the bad spelling/grammar and random capitals.
11/8/2010 c7 33tootapanga 1
hehe another amazing piece of work. well done. sorry we gotta get to that other story soon. XOX
11/8/2010 c7 dpdp
9/7/2010 c6 tootapanga 1
well im glad somebody thinks im awesome. lol thanks for the mention.

'ok thaats just grose' *laughs hysterically* soo jack. its a bit sad really. oh well im loving it.

was it another puzzle piece that she saw?

looking foward to more.
9/7/2010 c5 tootapanga 1

the eugoegly was really good. it was so sad that i thought about crying.

but then i was in such a good mood, about the strange turn of events that i couldnt possibly shed a tear. seariously. it was good.

8/30/2010 c6 2louisa78
An excellent story so far, looking forward to see where you are going to take this.
8/21/2010 c5 dpdp
Nice chapter. More please.
8/10/2010 c2 33tootapanga 1
wen you gonna upload? im looking foward to chapter five.
7/18/2010 c4 tootapanga 1
well within that range, im lovin it, do-dah-do-do-do. oh i love that add to, now i want hungry-jacks. jacks...jack.. as in... get it. ok, nope im just tired lol. haha haha ha... nope ok, but please update soon. XOX
7/18/2010 c3 tootapanga 1
yes im still loving it... i really like the comment about no fish, no friends... thats cute. sorry i havnt reviewed in a while my computer is broken and im using a friends. but im still liking alot.. :D
6/29/2010 c2 sewitsme
I was attracted to your story by the teaster on the main page. I did continue to read the story and I have been enjoying it. Jack - (Sam + Daniel + Teal'c)= good story.

I am not a writer, but I must point out that you would benefit greatly with the services of a beta reader. The proliferation of randomly capitalized words is disconcerting and interrupts the flow as does the reversal of common adjectives. "A photo Book" and "leather brown pants" for example.

Please, I'm not trying to flame on you. To be able to tell a good story is a wonderful gift and a gift meant to share. Some small improvements will help you do just that. Keep up the good work.
6/28/2010 c4 10Cort 85
Two more good chapters; you've really got me curious with this... keep up the good work :)
6/24/2010 c1 tootapanga1
hey, just wanted to let you know that me and by friend stevieluvsalex read your fanfic, and we thought it was really good. keep going, we look foward to the rest. p.s. theyre not really dead are they? are you doing another 'omoroca' whats it called fire and water is it. in season three with daniel. please please dont let them be least not daniel, i have a soft spot for him, if you absooloutly must kill someone just please leave daniel alive. lol anyway were really enjoying it, so please update soon. :D
6/24/2010 c2 Cort 85
Not a bad start, I'm curious about what's next...

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