for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha: Power Of Time6/5/2016 c4 RoseBloodmane
Well this was damn interesting to say the least. Make this a Nanoha X fate maybe towards the end or give some Nanoha X Fate Moments in some chapters. All and all story was great, although i'm a little upset that she can only do defensive spells. I mean I thought it be more interesting if she could do both Defensive and Close Combat. This gave me some more idea's, but i'll worry about them later got to many Stories going at the moment. I do like how you made her strong, let just hope you make her stronger then Hayate like maybe SSS or something.
Anyways if your still working on this i'll be waiting for next chapter.
Well this was damn interesting to say the least. Make this a Nanoha X fate maybe towards the end or give some Nanoha X Fate Moments in some chapters. All and all story was great, although i'm a little upset that she can only do defensive spells. I mean I thought it be more interesting if she could do both Defensive and Close Combat. This gave me some more idea's, but i'll worry about them later got to many Stories going at the moment. I do like how you made her strong, let just hope you make her stronger then Hayate like maybe SSS or something.
Anyways if your still working on this i'll be waiting for next chapter.
1/11/2014 c1 xyz
'At least I'm not dressed like Sailor Moon'... LOOOL xD I often alternate between both Animes, and I have to think that EVERY FREAKING TIME! Very good job, both writing, story telling and keeping the tension up Thank you!
'At least I'm not dressed like Sailor Moon'... LOOOL xD I often alternate between both Animes, and I have to think that EVERY FREAKING TIME! Very good job, both writing, story telling and keeping the tension up Thank you!
11/27/2012 c3 
1Nocna Vatra
LOVE THIS FIC! I just finished rereading it! I REALLY hope you will update this fic. Please, Please update! *Puppy eyes*
1Nocna VatraLOVE THIS FIC! I just finished rereading it! I REALLY hope you will update this fic. Please, Please update! *Puppy eyes*
8/4/2012 c4 Guest
Awesome!
please update soon!
Awesome!
please update soon!
6/27/2012 c4 Nightraze
This is a awesome fic! I really like the way you've written this and the storyline looks cool and interesting also! i really want to see Nanoha meet Fate properly so PLEASE UPDATE! _
This is a awesome fic! I really like the way you've written this and the storyline looks cool and interesting also! i really want to see Nanoha meet Fate properly so PLEASE UPDATE! _
11/15/2011 c4 19Tear of Light
Well done! Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, some stuff in real life has been keeping me busy. Putting that aside, I love what you've done with this chapter. That dream sequence Nanoha had was particularly eerie. I certainly hope that never happens. Lol.
I look forward to your next chapter. :)
19Tear of LightWell done! Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, some stuff in real life has been keeping me busy. Putting that aside, I love what you've done with this chapter. That dream sequence Nanoha had was particularly eerie. I certainly hope that never happens. Lol.
I look forward to your next chapter. :)
10/12/2011 c4 dragon king
Awesome fic waiting for the next ch. By the way, can you start updating Fate Stay Night:Infernus?
Awesome fic waiting for the next ch. By the way, can you start updating Fate Stay Night:Infernus?
9/27/2011 c4 Krabkrab
I'm guessing her powers and body, aren't developed enough to use any of her "buster"s... I think I'll favourite this because I'm curious as to how this goes.
I'm guessing her powers and body, aren't developed enough to use any of her "buster"s... I think I'll favourite this because I'm curious as to how this goes.
9/12/2011 c4 Lance58
nooooo.. i want moree.. please update soon... i want to see nanoha and fate meet
nooooo.. i want moree.. please update soon... i want to see nanoha and fate meet