
8/13/2010 c3 lahfp9ay637qogfaff
L IS ULQUIORRAAAAAA! No, I don't actually believe that. But half the fandom does ...
Loved this chapter! Keep it up Toxic! ;D
L IS ULQUIORRAAAAAA! No, I don't actually believe that. But half the fandom does ...
Loved this chapter! Keep it up Toxic! ;D
8/3/2010 c3
2Nekone
lol
i actauly like it! how canit not be a good chapter? ^^
i just really like tha fact that you gave BB-kun a lot of emotion but at the same time its not usual for him to do so

lol
i actauly like it! how canit not be a good chapter? ^^
i just really like tha fact that you gave BB-kun a lot of emotion but at the same time its not usual for him to do so
7/30/2010 c1 Lambent Penumbra
When 'author's notes' dominate in a story something is off. I suggest adding less text in bold and avoiding script formatting.
Penumbra
'I aimed at the public's heart, and by accident I hit it in the stomach.' -Upton Sinclair
When 'author's notes' dominate in a story something is off. I suggest adding less text in bold and avoiding script formatting.
Penumbra
'I aimed at the public's heart, and by accident I hit it in the stomach.' -Upton Sinclair
7/30/2010 c3 Noni
I felt a little..uncomfortable reading this,but I liked it! =D
Go on! Go on!
I felt a little..uncomfortable reading this,but I liked it! =D
Go on! Go on!
7/23/2010 c2 kirathekid13
lolz. wat a great story, sophie... i mean toxic
lolz. wat a great story, sophie... i mean toxic
7/3/2010 c2
11Fading to oblivion
Awww yes this is VERY cute ^-^ I love your author notes too, they make me laugh ;) ANYWAY, great story, i cant wait till you update! i cant believe you have so few reviews!
*sends a chibi l after anyone who didn't review so they die by cuteness*

Awww yes this is VERY cute ^-^ I love your author notes too, they make me laugh ;) ANYWAY, great story, i cant wait till you update! i cant believe you have so few reviews!
*sends a chibi l after anyone who didn't review so they die by cuteness*
7/3/2010 c2 lahfp9ay637qogfaff
LLOOOOVVVEEEE IIITTTTTTTT! I just love it when Lawli cries! XD Great work, Toxic!
LLOOOOVVVEEEE IIITTTTTTTT! I just love it when Lawli cries! XD Great work, Toxic!