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7/24/2010 c3 2Awesomely-Awesome Alice
Weird. ^^ Can't wait to see what's next!
7/18/2010 c2 1Kidnapped by a Demon
Please update soon awesome story so far
7/2/2010 c2 XXTakaraXX
Yeah kind of short, but everyone needs sleep :D.cant rush a good thing.Kammey and shannon remind me of me and my friend. im more like shannon :\ update soon :)
7/1/2010 c1 Kiko Tuchanka
AWESOME DUDE!
6/28/2010 c1 XXTakaraXX
post soon :)
6/27/2010 c1 Semi-Dead Sociopath
Leave me alone. I think I need to go mope in my emo corner while wiping off tears of blood.

There is one word that describes this pitiful chapter one: Tragic.

The caps lock rape on the title is appalling. You lack punctuation, there is misuse of words and contradictorily, there is a lacking capitalization inside the story.

May I ask a harmless question? Does your keyboard lack an enter key, or are you so mentally impaired that you fail to notice that you have to use paragraphs in a story?

I-I think Kammy has a defect within her cranium. That, or she is just acting like a bimbo on high. Did I just insult you? Oh, I'm sorry.

Delete this, and go grow some brain cells before posting up another story.

Yours truly,

Semi-Dead
6/26/2010 c1 2Awesomely-Awesome Alice
Love it! Very funny, too. Continue writing stories! ^-

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