for Sibling Rivalry4/16/2022 c4 AshelySummerLily
Those names are very rude, it is not appropriate to call anyone that, especially your readers. Though nice story, i really liked it, great work, well done.
Those names are very rude, it is not appropriate to call anyone that, especially your readers. Though nice story, i really liked it, great work, well done.
3/23/2020 c1 Sarah
Awww cute
Awww cute
7/23/2019 c4 Guest
I love this
I love this
4/21/2016 c4 Guest
i really like the fleshy appendages protruding from my palm so yeah
i really like the fleshy appendages protruding from my palm so yeah
4/5/2016 c4 Guest
Good job! I loved little lily! She is so cute!
Good job! I loved little lily! She is so cute!
12/24/2015 c4 What
It makes me not want to review. When yourre being mean
It makes me not want to review. When yourre being mean
8/3/2015 c4 Whale Saver Zip
THIS IS AWESOME! WRITE MORE! SO CUTE!
THIS IS AWESOME! WRITE MORE! SO CUTE!
3/23/2015 c4 Guest
I love it
I love it
3/14/2015 c4 Guest
Love it so much! Keep writing!
Love it so much! Keep writing!
12/8/2014 c4 AvidReader4746
I'm glad we saw some of Teddy in this chapter, as I imagine he would be like a sibling to all of the Potters. Again, well done with the realism in regard to Quidditch arguments.
I'm glad we saw some of Teddy in this chapter, as I imagine he would be like a sibling to all of the Potters. Again, well done with the realism in regard to Quidditch arguments.
12/8/2014 c1 AvidReader4746
I think Quidditch is something that the Potter kids would fight over- so well done on the realism front.
I think Quidditch is something that the Potter kids would fight over- so well done on the realism front.
12/7/2014 c4 Guest
Hurry up and update.
Hurry up and update.
11/4/2014 c4 Heliey
Ok that is NOT funny when you call your readers al those names. It's mean. But your story is AMAZZINGGG so I'll let it go.
Ok that is NOT funny when you call your readers al those names. It's mean. But your story is AMAZZINGGG so I'll let it go.