for If Wishes Were Horses9/3/2012 c10 Guest
Loved this story! Really interesting how you twisted things up the way you did. I really enjoyed reading it.
Also, I love the way you make all the characters sound so authentic! And the Buffy / Spike bits were completely yummy! :)
Loved this story! Really interesting how you twisted things up the way you did. I really enjoyed reading it.
Also, I love the way you make all the characters sound so authentic! And the Buffy / Spike bits were completely yummy! :)
7/7/2012 c10 Guest
very good story
very good story
5/7/2012 c9 Patient131071
OK, first of all, this is really brilliant; I never really liked the Buffy wishverse, but with Spike, you've made it simply excellent. However, I can't help but think that at the end of chapter nine, if the sex with Buffy was really that good, he would have turned her, regardless of how Dru felt about it, as opposed to leaving her or keeping her alive.
Sorry, I feel like I'm being picky, it just seems a little out of character, probably made more obvious since you've captured him so well.
OK, first of all, this is really brilliant; I never really liked the Buffy wishverse, but with Spike, you've made it simply excellent. However, I can't help but think that at the end of chapter nine, if the sex with Buffy was really that good, he would have turned her, regardless of how Dru felt about it, as opposed to leaving her or keeping her alive.
Sorry, I feel like I'm being picky, it just seems a little out of character, probably made more obvious since you've captured him so well.
6/29/2011 c1 sagoscomoli
What a nice AU story! You certainly have a strong feel for the characters and a clear understanding of how to establish a compelling story arc. Good job! Hope to see more stories from you.
What a nice AU story! You certainly have a strong feel for the characters and a clear understanding of how to establish a compelling story arc. Good job! Hope to see more stories from you.
7/29/2010 c10 
46rebelxxwaltz
Hahaha, nice. I'm not sure if I reviewed chapter 9, but that was a good one too. Is the story complete now, or is there more left to go?
Seems you still have some material left to work with... after all, if Cordelia never made her wish, wouldn't Anyanka still have her powers? Very interesting, even if she does use them on Jonathan! ;)
46rebelxxwaltzHahaha, nice. I'm not sure if I reviewed chapter 9, but that was a good one too. Is the story complete now, or is there more left to go?
Seems you still have some material left to work with... after all, if Cordelia never made her wish, wouldn't Anyanka still have her powers? Very interesting, even if she does use them on Jonathan! ;)
7/28/2010 c10 20applemysteries
This was great! And, Anya didn't even have to have her pendant destroyed either. :D Love that Spike called the paramedics for Buffy, so sweet. :)
20applemysteriesThis was great! And, Anya didn't even have to have her pendant destroyed either. :D Love that Spike called the paramedics for Buffy, so sweet. :)
7/22/2010 c8 46rebelxxwaltz
Hahaha, oh yay! You added Ethan to the story! I knew it was him as soon as you mentioned that hideous black and silver shirt. I really kind of enjoy Ethan in fics- he has such a strong 'love to hate him' presence, and interactions between him and Giles can actually be pretty hilarious.
This story is still coming along nicely. The makeshift hospital setting you've depicted is very creative, and you can definitely see why the hospitals wouldn't exactly be operational or safe in the Wishverse... just more well thought out detail that gives the fic extra depth.
What else can I say? I'm enjoying it a lot. And way to leave us hanging off the cliff with that chapter ending- surely he doesn't kill him off? Something interesting must happen! I hope you update it soon, because I really want to know what happens next!
46rebelxxwaltzHahaha, oh yay! You added Ethan to the story! I knew it was him as soon as you mentioned that hideous black and silver shirt. I really kind of enjoy Ethan in fics- he has such a strong 'love to hate him' presence, and interactions between him and Giles can actually be pretty hilarious.
This story is still coming along nicely. The makeshift hospital setting you've depicted is very creative, and you can definitely see why the hospitals wouldn't exactly be operational or safe in the Wishverse... just more well thought out detail that gives the fic extra depth.
What else can I say? I'm enjoying it a lot. And way to leave us hanging off the cliff with that chapter ending- surely he doesn't kill him off? Something interesting must happen! I hope you update it soon, because I really want to know what happens next!