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12/22/2012 c3 Foxface2001
Brilliant end.
Write more!
Ps brill idea!
7/22/2012 c2 brianna0596
GREAT! LOVE IT!
7/22/2012 c1 brianna0596
really good the seriousness is great it needs to be that way for the hunger games part of it
10/27/2011 c1 Jess
Please continue ! I think it's really interesting .
7/27/2011 c1 7Bluetory
This is my NEW ACCOUNT! :) I cant access this account to take the story off, and I really would like to finish writing this, so instead I'm just going to have to repost the story onto my new account. I realize that my writing isn't so great on the story now, so I'll fix that too! :)

I'm sorry for not doing anything to tell you guys earlier ^^;

Thanks for all your support! :D
6/22/2011 c3 XxxFire RosexxX
I like this story its get good. please keep it up and write more chapters.PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE. Also just to let you know i'm faving this. :D
4/29/2011 c1 theShadyLady
Very sorry to the author of this story for putting randomness on your review pg ((your not the only 1 i wrote this on, plez dnt b affended)) but..

Ok doesnt the song "Blind" by Jason Derulo seem like perfect for the scene in book1 of HG where Peeta finds out bout Katniss's fake love for him when they are walking away from the train and then the long ride back?

and also who is TEAM GALE out there, I mean like everybody is TEAM Peeta... and at the end of book 3 with no official Good bye to Gale? I mean come on... quoteing LikeSeriously, it seems like one of those Crazy TEAM PEETA people tied S.C. up and made her do that?

~~theShadyLady
4/28/2011 c3 2Mrmeh
you you you you you need to continue, i love it XD very original!
4/10/2011 c3 24lovebitesx
Don't stop! This is amazing! It would be a crime if you didn't continue with this! (:
1/15/2011 c3 18Writerswand
kk. I liked the chapter but, bloody?

Last time I checked Haymitch was of District 12 and District 12 is around the Pennsylvanian state area AMERICA

Just a bit of future advice there.
12/22/2010 c2 Lady X on the Radio
You NEEEEEEED to update! I'm not just saying that because I think your storys truly wonderful, but I definitely think you are talented as a writer!
10/26/2010 c2 treehuggingcookiemonster
RADICAL IDEA!
8/1/2010 c2 7opaque prism
This is a pretty good story, but if I could make a few suggestions;

*Make the chapters a little longer

*Go into a little more detail

*Put a little more back story in

Sorry, but this is a really good story and these would just, in my mind, make it a little better.

Continue please.
7/8/2010 c2 18Writerswand
So...I have some healthy criticism for you. Nothings wrong with short chapters but I think you could still add more to them. I noticed that the majority of this chapter was in dialogue. You can't make a story entirely out of dialgue, sure it's easy, cause thats how we think and talk in everyday life. but try adding other things, like setting and crap.

Anyhow, good story you have going on here.

hehe, 'Katniss in Wonderland, how ever did you get to Wonderland'
7/6/2010 c1 Writerswand
heheheheheheheehe ^^

that was funny. I read it with my friends and we acted out Haymitch talking all drunk like. Haymitch is epic!

then they started singing Katniss In Wonderland...

hehe, please continue!
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