for Splintered Existence3/27/2013 c4 
1muffinmom
The switch of POV confused me a bit, though I can get why you needed to do that. Not sure why Alice had to stay still so long for her vision to go through? Please don’t go the cliché route with the Cullen family! I can see why they're worried about the hypnotherapy bringing up info on the vampires, curious to see where are you going to take this next. Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get to write/post it! And sorry, I have no medical background so can't comment on that, I assume google has been your friend for that!
1muffinmomThe switch of POV confused me a bit, though I can get why you needed to do that. Not sure why Alice had to stay still so long for her vision to go through? Please don’t go the cliché route with the Cullen family! I can see why they're worried about the hypnotherapy bringing up info on the vampires, curious to see where are you going to take this next. Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get to write/post it! And sorry, I have no medical background so can't comment on that, I assume google has been your friend for that!
3/27/2013 c2 muffinmom
I'm a bit confused by Renee's suggestion to take her to FL right away? Bella's reactions sound real enough though ;) Kinda tough for her parents to hear her confusion on the date, I like how you used that to show her memory loss.
I'm a bit confused by Renee's suggestion to take her to FL right away? Bella's reactions sound real enough though ;) Kinda tough for her parents to hear her confusion on the date, I like how you used that to show her memory loss.
3/27/2013 c1 muffinmom
Nice beginning, I'm a bit surprised at Charlie not having her a dr look her over right away but I'll go with it. Dont' blame him for asking Renee to come and help.
Nice beginning, I'm a bit surprised at Charlie not having her a dr look her over right away but I'll go with it. Dont' blame him for asking Renee to come and help.
5/26/2011 c4 Bellawitch75
AMAZING! it is a very interesting plot to follow. Keep the story going and you will get more r&R
AMAZING! it is a very interesting plot to follow. Keep the story going and you will get more r&R
7/10/2010 c1 8Aleeab4u
So heartbreaking. :( You did a wonderful job with this! Good luck with the rest, you know I'll be reading. xo
8Aleeab4uSo heartbreaking. :( You did a wonderful job with this! Good luck with the rest, you know I'll be reading. xo
7/8/2010 c1 Bellawitch75
Wow, unexpected kind of story. I hope this update regularly. It has a good promise for what I read right now. Keep doing the story you won't regret it.
Wow, unexpected kind of story. I hope this update regularly. It has a good promise for what I read right now. Keep doing the story you won't regret it.
6/29/2010 c1 aesook
this is new i like it! update soon please!
this is new i like it! update soon please!
6/29/2010 c1 Satosky
So she basically forgot her memories but she wants to be a vampire and is her memories are trying to come back...interesting.
So she basically forgot her memories but she wants to be a vampire and is her memories are trying to come back...interesting.
6/29/2010 c1 betsmecullen
Yay! It's up.
I felt the nothingness that Bella felt. Great description. I'm looking forward to watching Bella progress through her grief and depression.
Yay! It's up.
I felt the nothingness that Bella felt. Great description. I'm looking forward to watching Bella progress through her grief and depression.