
10/21/2010 c1
19ColourMeChaos
It doesn't end! Where's the end, you tease? I wanna read the end! What happens?

It doesn't end! Where's the end, you tease? I wanna read the end! What happens?
7/1/2010 c1 nashbash21
I LOVED IT!
I think it was amazing and i love the way you write Lovering :) IT is so freaking mature and i can totally picture the interpretive ending... Keep going! :D
I LOVED IT!
I think it was amazing and i love the way you write Lovering :) IT is so freaking mature and i can totally picture the interpretive ending... Keep going! :D
6/29/2010 c1 SmittyFirefly
First and foremost, only you, Mademoiselle Nash, can write a story called "Bear Hugs" and say in the summary that it includes words like "hell" and "crap".
Ok, ok. It's so cute, and, cliché, just a tad, that Jacob shows up right when he needs her most. Actually, no. It is more cute than cliché. I don't know what else to say, I'd probably say it's nice to see a calm side to her, had I read Twilight, but I'm guessing from your past story she's usually moody. Ok, so I can't review the story, having not read Eclipse, but it's very cute.
Ps, that is an awesome duck =)
Pps, I think Jacob took Leah's head in his hands, gazing deep in her (insert eye colour here) eyes, and kissed her lightly on the lips. X3
First and foremost, only you, Mademoiselle Nash, can write a story called "Bear Hugs" and say in the summary that it includes words like "hell" and "crap".
Ok, ok. It's so cute, and, cliché, just a tad, that Jacob shows up right when he needs her most. Actually, no. It is more cute than cliché. I don't know what else to say, I'd probably say it's nice to see a calm side to her, had I read Twilight, but I'm guessing from your past story she's usually moody. Ok, so I can't review the story, having not read Eclipse, but it's very cute.
Ps, that is an awesome duck =)
Pps, I think Jacob took Leah's head in his hands, gazing deep in her (insert eye colour here) eyes, and kissed her lightly on the lips. X3
6/29/2010 c1
46Kei Jones
*blinks and frowns* ...why did I imagine Jacob Black throwing Leah into the river? lmbo.
Nicely done and good luck with that writer's block. It can be a bear.

*blinks and frowns* ...why did I imagine Jacob Black throwing Leah into the river? lmbo.
Nicely done and good luck with that writer's block. It can be a bear.
6/29/2010 c1 MilyMileyEmy
Hey!
I got lazy and didn't feel like signing in, but by the name you should realize who this is :D
Very nicely written story. At the end, did Jacob hug her or kiss her..? Just asking. :P
Talk to ya soon :)
Mily/Miley/Emy
Hey!
I got lazy and didn't feel like signing in, but by the name you should realize who this is :D
Very nicely written story. At the end, did Jacob hug her or kiss her..? Just asking. :P
Talk to ya soon :)
Mily/Miley/Emy