for When Worlds Collide1/17/2018 c3 Naru
Vengo yo 7 años después a dar un review (?
Necesito una continuación de esto
No importa si actualizas ahora o en mil años, mis descendientes lo leerán por mi
Gracias
Nos vemos
Vengo yo 7 años después a dar un review (?
Necesito una continuación de esto
No importa si actualizas ahora o en mil años, mis descendientes lo leerán por mi
Gracias
Nos vemos
11/17/2011 c3 
6Darkfur-vampwolf
I love this fanfic very funny, very entertaining i love how when Dr.D said they were missing the first thing out of thomas' mouth was "Something happened to miss.Fiona?" XD
6Darkfur-vampwolfI love this fanfic very funny, very entertaining i love how when Dr.D said they were missing the first thing out of thomas' mouth was "Something happened to miss.Fiona?" XD
9/5/2011 c3 Zoids Fanatic
Wow, it has been a long time, thought this was dead. Oh, and yes, this is the same Zoids Fanatic from the wiki.
Wow, it has been a long time, thought this was dead. Oh, and yes, this is the same Zoids Fanatic from the wiki.
8/20/2010 c2 4Nightfire290
This was a better chapter. Detail was spot-on, dialog was nicely placed. I'm curious about that black Geno Breaker and Fox Zoid. In all, good chapter.
4Nightfire290This was a better chapter. Detail was spot-on, dialog was nicely placed. I'm curious about that black Geno Breaker and Fox Zoid. In all, good chapter.
8/20/2010 c1 Nightfire290
I was curious to see how you'd mix the universes, and it seems you did just fine. Plenty of dialog, but not a lot of detail. This isn't a flame, by the way. I liked the practice battle. You stayed true to Van's excellent combat skills. Going from a Blade Liger to a Shield Liger would require some adjustment, and you pretty much nailed it.
I was curious to see how you'd mix the universes, and it seems you did just fine. Plenty of dialog, but not a lot of detail. This isn't a flame, by the way. I liked the practice battle. You stayed true to Van's excellent combat skills. Going from a Blade Liger to a Shield Liger would require some adjustment, and you pretty much nailed it.
8/6/2010 c2 3HeartlessNeoshadow
This looked interesting, so I figured I'd check this out. At first, your story seemed like it was going to be very similar to Neoaurora's "Sky's the Limit: Revolution", but after delving in further, this turned out to be its own unique thing. Its very intriguing what you have going on between Van and the Liger Zero, as well as with the black Geno Breaker. The dialogue is also well-written.
My one complaint is that there should be more descriptive words and sentences inserted between the lines of dialogue. They help to further enhance the image you're trying to convey as well as the thoughts and the emotions. Beyond that, this is looking great! :)
3HeartlessNeoshadowThis looked interesting, so I figured I'd check this out. At first, your story seemed like it was going to be very similar to Neoaurora's "Sky's the Limit: Revolution", but after delving in further, this turned out to be its own unique thing. Its very intriguing what you have going on between Van and the Liger Zero, as well as with the black Geno Breaker. The dialogue is also well-written.
My one complaint is that there should be more descriptive words and sentences inserted between the lines of dialogue. They help to further enhance the image you're trying to convey as well as the thoughts and the emotions. Beyond that, this is looking great! :)
8/2/2010 c2 23Darkened-Storm
Yay an update! Finally!
well the story's getting really interesting.
It's still rushed in some parts, but it's good to see Van on the Blitz team. What's Fiona going to do though?
There's lots of unanswered questions in this chapter to keep readers wanting more. I certainly hope you don't take so long to update though =]
There are one or two errors in your typing that you should go back and correct, but other than that the writing itself is sound.
You write battles very well too.
I can't wait for the next chapter =]
23Darkened-StormYay an update! Finally!
well the story's getting really interesting.
It's still rushed in some parts, but it's good to see Van on the Blitz team. What's Fiona going to do though?
There's lots of unanswered questions in this chapter to keep readers wanting more. I certainly hope you don't take so long to update though =]
There are one or two errors in your typing that you should go back and correct, but other than that the writing itself is sound.
You write battles very well too.
I can't wait for the next chapter =]
7/6/2010 c1 23Darkened-Storm
This is the second story of yours that i've read, and I've got to say, I am rather impressed.
Despite that fact that it's kind of hard to read because you don't use a new paragraph each time someone speaks (it kind of looks all jumbled in there) I actually enjoyed the story so far. I think you kept to the characters very well and although it was a little jumpy, I was satisfied I'd read something good by the end. It's by no means perfect, but it's a good start.
Keep it up.
Xx D-Storm
23Darkened-StormThis is the second story of yours that i've read, and I've got to say, I am rather impressed.
Despite that fact that it's kind of hard to read because you don't use a new paragraph each time someone speaks (it kind of looks all jumbled in there) I actually enjoyed the story so far. I think you kept to the characters very well and although it was a little jumpy, I was satisfied I'd read something good by the end. It's by no means perfect, but it's a good start.
Keep it up.
Xx D-Storm