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3/16/2015 c2 1KouK
Safa. El capítulo uno fue mejor. La re flashaste cósmica, gil.
3/3/2013 c2 Guest
Stupid stupid stupid...

Betcha like Twilight, too huh?

Stupid sparkle vampires...
7/21/2012 c2 A2463
Love it!
6/30/2012 c2 caradens
excellent thanks
12/25/2011 c2 yay
This was, in all honesty, extremely odd.
10/16/2011 c2 LethalPoison
I loved it!
10/6/2011 c2 QuietMontana
Very good story! i loved it
7/1/2011 c2 3DontThink
i like it.
6/27/2011 c2 15KKSG
I don't know, I rather liked how it began. But I found the sudden turn to vampirism a little abrupt. Though there was that hint from when Bellatrix stabbed her fingers into Hermione's wound.

I feel that this plot could have expanded a lot more, but I can understand why you wanted to keep this a two chapter/one shot fic.

I found the ending a little...rushed? But nonetheless I still enjoyed this story so thank you very much! There just isn't Hermione/Bellatrix in the world. Sigh.
5/26/2011 c2 Smayz
Marvelous story, the weird gaps like how Bella forgot to ask her to strip completely puzzled me and the vampire component was a nice touch.
4/4/2011 c2 ScOut4It
Interesting twist.

Nice two chapter one-shot; I could have dug some more chapters detailing the events that are mentioned in this one, but it totally works too.

Thanks for painting outside the lines :)
4/4/2011 c1 ScOut4It
I like the detail you put into describing Hermione's dirty outfit to the point of her stockings missing.

I like how you described Bella canting her head so that her hair obscures her face so that Hermione can't read her emotions/reactions.

I like Bellatrix and Hermione stories a lot!

I like your story very much so far and always wish the stories I like would go on for days...

I like that when Hermione conceded some of her pride she was rewarded 'some' kindness.

I like the transition from blacking out to waking up.

I like that Bella isn't over the top reactive to Hermione's outbursts.

Now I'd like to continue reading chapter two.

Thank a bunch for writing!
12/1/2010 c2 laimposteur
That was bizarre. Vampire Bella? This is strange :p
12/1/2010 c1 laimposteur
I cringed at the finger in her leg eeeeeeeek. That was gross. The cellar was vivid made me feel sick. But that's what you were aiming for right? ;)
8/2/2010 c2 19comebacksirius
It's good, I mean, nice attempt but normal smut would have also been ok. I just don't see the attraction of vampirism.
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