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7/13/2010 c1 yessir
I like torture n stuff, but you had too ("two") many typos within the first two lines to go on reading the piece.
7/10/2010 c1 LoriLestrange
Shit! It was going so well until they suddenly all turned into vampires! WTH!
7/9/2010 c2 37MadameCissy
Bellatrix a vampire... I can see it somewhere though it was still surprising. Perhaps you should add AU to the list? As it is quite out of character?

But I like it. Curious to see what will happen next.

PS ignore the review from Matt.. someone who cant even be arsed to sign in for real isnt worth listening to.
7/8/2010 c2 matt
it was great until you made bellatrix a vampire, then it got stupid
7/8/2010 c2 1Eryk Lestrange
well that was certainly out of left field

still, it was nice to see vampires as they were meant to be - erotic

not those pussies that they call vampires nowadays

also, getting sucked on by Bellatrix isn't much of a punishment - Hermione should've been spanked first ;-)
7/7/2010 c2 2Darkshadow-lord
Very Nice! I really enjoyed reading it!
7/6/2010 c1 1Eryk Lestrange
more please!
7/6/2010 c1 37MadameCissy
Very dark indeed... I like it!

Bella is very much in character. I can see her do all those things
7/6/2010 c1 2Darkshadow-lord
Interesting! I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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