for The Most Common Lie5/17/2022 c1 Msdib
What a terrific tag to the episode! I hated that they had him lie to Jeanne. I think that telling her the truth would have made her feel better.
What a terrific tag to the episode! I hated that they had him lie to Jeanne. I think that telling her the truth would have made her feel better.
3/22/2019 c1 Vadercat
Yeah that was one story line I didn't like, because clearly DiNozzo loved her and why she didn't see the lie behind the lie I never got. You could actually feel Tony's pain in that storyline, but she needed to believe he killed her father and couldn't seem to wrap her mind around that anyone else could be the culprit. She couldn't face the criminal her father really was, but how she hid her head in the sand about him and couldn't face the truth that Tony really did love her and it wasn't all lies, I don't get. Good follow-up story to start a healing all around.
Yeah that was one story line I didn't like, because clearly DiNozzo loved her and why she didn't see the lie behind the lie I never got. You could actually feel Tony's pain in that storyline, but she needed to believe he killed her father and couldn't seem to wrap her mind around that anyone else could be the culprit. She couldn't face the criminal her father really was, but how she hid her head in the sand about him and couldn't face the truth that Tony really did love her and it wasn't all lies, I don't get. Good follow-up story to start a healing all around.
8/29/2015 c1 
5Frakking Toasters
I wish Gibbs (and the team) had treated Tony this well after this event. I wasn't happy with how the show handled it at all. This is way better. Thanks for writing it. xo
5Frakking ToastersI wish Gibbs (and the team) had treated Tony this well after this event. I wasn't happy with how the show handled it at all. This is way better. Thanks for writing it. xo
2/5/2014 c1 17VG LittleBear
Hi, excellent story. I can totally see this happening in my mind's eye. Although Gibbs keeping his cool with coffee spilt? I would have expected a parting shot at least, LOL.
Thanks and cheers!
17VG LittleBearHi, excellent story. I can totally see this happening in my mind's eye. Although Gibbs keeping his cool with coffee spilt? I would have expected a parting shot at least, LOL.
Thanks and cheers!
6/1/2013 c1 6fanficfantasies
I like the pool about how long Tony could make it without being accused of murder a lot. I think it was the best joke in there. Great job, too!
6fanficfantasiesI like the pool about how long Tony could make it without being accused of murder a lot. I think it was the best joke in there. Great job, too!
6/11/2011 c1 Long Live BRUCAS
Poor Tony
At least he knows he has the team and more important Gibbs by his side.
Poor Tony
At least he knows he has the team and more important Gibbs by his side.
4/9/2011 c1 Alisa123
wish we could have seen this on the show...didn't like how tony was treated by gibbs and the team.
alisa
wish we could have seen this on the show...didn't like how tony was treated by gibbs and the team.
alisa
9/11/2010 c1 128Mulderette
Excellent. Love how you characterize Tony & Gibbs and you did a great job getting into Tony's head. Very nicely done :)
128MulderetteExcellent. Love how you characterize Tony & Gibbs and you did a great job getting into Tony's head. Very nicely done :)
8/24/2010 c1 6Pough
Oh, man, my friend, another great fic. I so enjoy your writing. It's clean, the characterization is dead-on, and there's a natural flow to it. So few writers know how to build in pauses. Personally, I think it's because we're musicians.
Really, really lovely. I especially liked the weaving together of the rules. Nice!
See ya,
Pough
6PoughOh, man, my friend, another great fic. I so enjoy your writing. It's clean, the characterization is dead-on, and there's a natural flow to it. So few writers know how to build in pauses. Personally, I think it's because we're musicians.
Really, really lovely. I especially liked the weaving together of the rules. Nice!
See ya,
Pough
8/14/2010 c1 sterno
VERY GOOD STORY. TOO BAD TV AND THIS SHOW DIDN'T HAVE TIME FOR A SCENE LIKE THIS! WOULD HAVE BEEN ENJOYABLE TO WATCH THE INTERPLAY BETWEEN THE ACTORS.. THANKS FOR WRITING IT!
VERY GOOD STORY. TOO BAD TV AND THIS SHOW DIDN'T HAVE TIME FOR A SCENE LIKE THIS! WOULD HAVE BEEN ENJOYABLE TO WATCH THE INTERPLAY BETWEEN THE ACTORS.. THANKS FOR WRITING IT!
7/22/2010 c1 66xenascully
i really love how you write; the dialogue and mannerisms are very well done. I like the humor as well-very spot-on. I enjoy your stories and look forward to more of your stuff:)
66xenascullyi really love how you write; the dialogue and mannerisms are very well done. I like the humor as well-very spot-on. I enjoy your stories and look forward to more of your stuff:)
7/16/2010 c1 Hope06
awww hugs to tony
charcters were so well done it was scary even the actions from Gibbs he does soften slightly when it comes to tony
awww hugs to tony
charcters were so well done it was scary even the actions from Gibbs he does soften slightly when it comes to tony