for Iris3/4/2012 c3 zero09q
I meant to say make him split up Rukia and Kaien have someone to make Rukia jealous and bam she's back with Ichigo
I meant to say make him split up Rukia and Kaien have someone to make Rukia jealous and bam she's back with Ichigo
3/4/2012 c4 zero09q
I think Ichigo should step up and claim his damn girl and where is his badboy act
I think Ichigo should step up and claim his damn girl and where is his badboy act
5/29/2011 c4 jorie
ichigo's not over rukia... but rukia's already engaged..
so what happened to them that it ended that way?
im curious, that's why im subscribing.. =)
this was written very well, btw...
hope to read more..
ichigo's not over rukia... but rukia's already engaged..
so what happened to them that it ended that way?
im curious, that's why im subscribing.. =)
this was written very well, btw...
hope to read more..
11/19/2010 c3 
19wickedsistah1024
Well, first of all welcome back! It's been quite a while (though I'm not one to judge because it takes me months before I update something, too ^^'), glad to see an update from you. Hmm now with Orihime entering the picture, what could this entail for Rukia and Ichigo? Surely she isn't just a proverbial wallpaper as the two goes through with...whatever they have to go through to get back together. XD Or that's just me wanting to make Orihime as an antagonist seeing as Rukia has Kaien. XD This chapter leaves a lot to be imagined, so I can only hope for another update from you soon. Good job! Write on! :D
19wickedsistah1024Well, first of all welcome back! It's been quite a while (though I'm not one to judge because it takes me months before I update something, too ^^'), glad to see an update from you. Hmm now with Orihime entering the picture, what could this entail for Rukia and Ichigo? Surely she isn't just a proverbial wallpaper as the two goes through with...whatever they have to go through to get back together. XD Or that's just me wanting to make Orihime as an antagonist seeing as Rukia has Kaien. XD This chapter leaves a lot to be imagined, so I can only hope for another update from you soon. Good job! Write on! :D
11/18/2010 c3 4teshichan
interesting plot (^_^) can't wait to read more of this.
ah the classic ichigo-rukia-kaien triangle... (_) i wonder what happened that led to the situation... (O_O)
hope you update soon!
4teshichaninteresting plot (^_^) can't wait to read more of this.
ah the classic ichigo-rukia-kaien triangle... (_) i wonder what happened that led to the situation... (O_O)
hope you update soon!
7/12/2010 c2 57can I have a new username
The ending was one big mesh up of cute, sortofsadbutnotsosad and memories. Me likees :3
57can I have a new usernameThe ending was one big mesh up of cute, sortofsadbutnotsosad and memories. Me likees :3
7/12/2010 c1 can I have a new username
Hmm, I don't know what to say about this. The writing is okay, but the circumstances the three are in, aren't pleasing to me~ I hope things will change, for good or for bad xD
Hmm, I don't know what to say about this. The writing is okay, but the circumstances the three are in, aren't pleasing to me~ I hope things will change, for good or for bad xD
7/11/2010 c2 xTaSaxProductionx
Hello!
Once again I loved your chapter! And don't worry about the size of the chapters, they're fine like this. Describing things thoroughly is good. It gives context to the story.
And my question was answered. So that's why Ichigo is an architect. Very cool! And a themed park? Normally architects don't like those things, except for the money part... But I think it's a really cool idea. My dream as an architect is to work with biologists and scientists and create a better place for us all, animals and humans, not just build things. My final exam was a project in collaboration with the Zoo of my city. I just finished my degree last year so I'm still dreaming like this. :P
Anyway...I'm rambling! Keep your writings! I'll keep reading! ^-^ Good Luck!
Hello!
Once again I loved your chapter! And don't worry about the size of the chapters, they're fine like this. Describing things thoroughly is good. It gives context to the story.
And my question was answered. So that's why Ichigo is an architect. Very cool! And a themed park? Normally architects don't like those things, except for the money part... But I think it's a really cool idea. My dream as an architect is to work with biologists and scientists and create a better place for us all, animals and humans, not just build things. My final exam was a project in collaboration with the Zoo of my city. I just finished my degree last year so I'm still dreaming like this. :P
Anyway...I'm rambling! Keep your writings! I'll keep reading! ^-^ Good Luck!
7/11/2010 c2 7Water-star
It's been a while since I've done a review (due to complete laziness), however, seeing the lack of comments on your story, I feel that I should put my own two cents in. Personally, I think you're doing a good job with the flowing of the story thus far, keeping the characters in check, and a unique story idea. (That and the fact that Ichigo wants to make Rukia's dream come alive is too damn good to pass up.)
I look forward to the fututre chapters.
P.S. I also noticed that you've blocked permission for anonymous reviews - I'm not sure whether or not you knew that but I thought I should tell you.
7Water-starIt's been a while since I've done a review (due to complete laziness), however, seeing the lack of comments on your story, I feel that I should put my own two cents in. Personally, I think you're doing a good job with the flowing of the story thus far, keeping the characters in check, and a unique story idea. (That and the fact that Ichigo wants to make Rukia's dream come alive is too damn good to pass up.)
I look forward to the fututre chapters.
P.S. I also noticed that you've blocked permission for anonymous reviews - I'm not sure whether or not you knew that but I thought I should tell you.
7/10/2010 c2 19wickedsistah1024
I saw Chappy coming when the building of the theme park was first mentiond. Lol.
Ichigo is so sweet! Sweet is even an understatement! He's very thoughtful and sincere! And to make a big decision THAT life-altering (choosing a career path) based on a dream the woman he loves had was the very personification of unconditional love. That was moving. It made me go 'Awww' so bad. I laughed at Hitsugaya's use of words. Lol. Harsh, but he means well. Good thing Rangiku's there to...interpret?...him. XD
Great work! Write on!
19wickedsistah1024I saw Chappy coming when the building of the theme park was first mentiond. Lol.
Ichigo is so sweet! Sweet is even an understatement! He's very thoughtful and sincere! And to make a big decision THAT life-altering (choosing a career path) based on a dream the woman he loves had was the very personification of unconditional love. That was moving. It made me go 'Awww' so bad. I laughed at Hitsugaya's use of words. Lol. Harsh, but he means well. Good thing Rangiku's there to...interpret?...him. XD
Great work! Write on!
7/7/2010 c1 evil villainess
oh wow.. that was so well-written.
sounds intriguing too! O: can't wait for the next chappie
oh wow.. that was so well-written.
sounds intriguing too! O: can't wait for the next chappie
7/7/2010 c1 gadez
well, this is something different...and your first chapter was definitely interesting and well written...anticipating the next one!
well, this is something different...and your first chapter was definitely interesting and well written...anticipating the next one!
7/6/2010 c1 xTaSaxProductionx
Poor Ichigo! ^-^
They'll meet again won't they? And he'll sweep Rukia off her feet! :D ahaha
Seriously now, you have a very interesting story here. How are you going to make them meet again? I mean, they don't have each other contact or anything right? Fate does the job I guess! :D
I like that you made Ichi an architect,I am one ^-^, but why? I always thought that given his background he'll be a doctor of some sorts. I'm just curious.
Keep writing! Good Luck! ^-^
Poor Ichigo! ^-^
They'll meet again won't they? And he'll sweep Rukia off her feet! :D ahaha
Seriously now, you have a very interesting story here. How are you going to make them meet again? I mean, they don't have each other contact or anything right? Fate does the job I guess! :D
I like that you made Ichi an architect,I am one ^-^, but why? I always thought that given his background he'll be a doctor of some sorts. I'm just curious.
Keep writing! Good Luck! ^-^
7/6/2010 c1 wickedsistah1024
Aww. That was sweet! And your first story
here, too? Incredibly well-written!
I have recently just developed a Kaien obssession, and reading a fic where he acts all gentlemanly and sweet and romantic practically turned me into mush. I really swooned. I love how you focused on Ichigo's thoughts while he watched the couple interact. It was nice to see how he felt even after tge years had gone by. Poor guy. Rukia's such a lucky girl.
I know you said this is IchiRuki, but I honestly wouldn't mind seeing more KaiRuki in your future updates, which I'll be looking forward to.
Great job! Keep writing! :D
Aww. That was sweet! And your first story
here, too? Incredibly well-written!
I have recently just developed a Kaien obssession, and reading a fic where he acts all gentlemanly and sweet and romantic practically turned me into mush. I really swooned. I love how you focused on Ichigo's thoughts while he watched the couple interact. It was nice to see how he felt even after tge years had gone by. Poor guy. Rukia's such a lucky girl.
I know you said this is IchiRuki, but I honestly wouldn't mind seeing more KaiRuki in your future updates, which I'll be looking forward to.
Great job! Keep writing! :D