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7/7/2010 c1 InsaneBookworm
Awesome concept. This was a fantastic bright spot for my day!
7/7/2010 c1 eytedrfghjiolhg528ddfxcde
Loved it..! It was Awesomee and I hope you review soon
7/7/2010 c1 NuitTombee
Very original. I liked it a lot.
7/7/2010 c1 timt020
That was great, But what hapened to the girl.
7/7/2010 c1 2Alstreim
One word: EPIC
7/7/2010 c1 27Senyor Fier Mensheir
That was so effin cool!

It was like an effed up RPG! or MMORPG for that matter!

Can they go back? Are there any GMs running around?

I would love to read another!

ROFLMAO to the MAX level!
7/7/2010 c1 Knyght
Good, you might consider an epilogue if just for shit and giggles, and the reactions to gray harry and voldie.
7/7/2010 c1 1Bobboky
awesome work
7/7/2010 c1 1Junky
I can't wait for your next story? What category is it?
7/7/2010 c1 RobC
Very different and weird, but I liked it.

Rob
7/7/2010 c1 vagabond-des-mers
pas mal pas mal mais la fin est un peu anti-climatic pense pas. mais je suis content que tu ai poster du nouveau materiel j'attent d'autre avec impatience.
7/7/2010 c1 Red King
That last par was just awesome.
7/7/2010 c1 18Carumati
Wow, balance is the way to go I guess. If you could make a sister fic of Voldemort's killings... Somehow to turn light-er, that'll be awesome.

I love after-Tom though.
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