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8/30/2010 c5 Undertaker's Eyes
Wow. I love this story. Seemingly good plot (we haven't seen it all yet!), almost no grammar or spelling mistakes, and good character background. I've seen the Bella-can-use-telekinesis idea used many times, but this story is turning out to be the best. The only disappointment is that it isn't longer... yet! Please update as soon as you can! :)
8/29/2010 c5 AJ04-Jtrs98
Ok so I have two chapters...hell forget cloud nine...I'm over the moon happy. I loved it! Dear lord I wonder what her anxiety was all about...could it be a product of Cullen watching her or something? Anywho, I about died laughing reading your inner Angel/Devil speech. What I would have given to have the devil win out and watch Mike pass the hell out. That would have been hilarious but I understand the Angel's case. Ohhh to hear that lil angle curse was just to funny. I loved it love it loved it! I can't wait to see where you take our characters next...
8/29/2010 c4 AJ04-Jtrs98
Yay another chapter...I'm on cloud nine. So the conundrum that is Isabella Swan has began. I wonder if Edward will stay away long. I can't help but wonder what he will think of her telekenisis...that should be a grand ol time...
8/29/2010 c5 2Alanna-Banana1987
YIPPIE! You updated. :) I am very interested to see what goes on in the conversation with Bella and Edward. :) I liked how you put the whole Angel/Demon thing in as well as the thing with Edward glaring at Mike then happy as he see's Bella :) PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ keep writing!
8/29/2010 c5 sheeiur22
Thanks for that.
8/29/2010 c5 14Ori1
I really like this story. I am enjoying watching the story and Bella unfold. I can't wait to see the Bella and Edward interaction that will hopefully be happening next chapter.

How did you get the idea for this story?
8/29/2010 c5 4ElspethGordie
Mmm yea. I like this ending much better. This is going so well! I'm so excited for you! Great job!
8/29/2010 c4 ElspethGordie
Good job! ;)
8/29/2010 c5 2Anastasia Blaise
love it and can't wait for more and wait what is edward in love or something?
8/29/2010 c5 2Katoo
8/29/2010 c5 dlajmc
8/29/2010 c5 5vivx-chan
I really like this story so far... (I just read all the chapters today, so did Edward read her mind on chap 3 when she thought "Okay, Hotness. What's up with you?", it's the only think that make his behavior make sense)...
8/29/2010 c5 7xXI.AM.BEASTXx
This is an amazing story. I hope you update soon, please do. I promise to review every chapter from now on! You rock. I had tried to find this story for weeks before I got the update, I had ust forgotten the title. Now I have it burned into my mind.
8/29/2010 c5 GottaLoveFanFiction
It's a good story. Can't wait for the next update.
8/29/2010 c5 linny
love it!
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