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5/27/2013 c1 WarriorChick101
I can't believe everybody is saying that this out of character because if you think about it Clarisse is a daughter of Ares which means she would be forced to act tough and bad and stuff. If you were in her position would you want to cry and shout out to the world to listen up and say 'this is not me I want to be like everybody else. I want to wear my mask and not a mask somebody wants me to wear.'
2/19/2013 c1 114words-with-dragons
I liked this. I never considered them being together, but you might've just changed that. Before reviewing, I took a look at the other reviews. I, personally, don't find this OOC. Everyone has their moment of weakness, even Clarisse. Although a question comes to mind of what happened to Chris (let's just assume he died, shall we?) and how exactly she and Nico became friends in the first place, this was very believable and sweet. Although, since it was mostly Nico helping Clarisse, I think it would be sweet to see a piece (perhaps a sort-of-sequel, or a companion piece?) where Clarisse is comforting Nico. Relationships are all about balance after all. Over all, I really liked this. Good job.
2/16/2013 c1 Ignis76
I loved it!
2/6/2012 c1 endmylifeohmygod
I don't really like the couple, but you may have just changed that.
10/21/2011 c1 16Proud to be Plug
This is an unusual and interesting fic. The characters are not so much OOC as alternative interpretations of the characters. Unfortunately some reviewers do not seem to have quite gotten this idea, so I would propose you ignore them.

I wouldn't necessarily it's brilliant, but it is exploring different ground, and is well-written. Thus I would say it is pretty good. The pairing is pretty unconventional, but it works in its own way.

I'll conclude by commending you on your fearless exploration of these two characters.

Please write more fics!

-ProudtobePlug
12/1/2010 c1 YOU FAIL
UGH IF I EVER HAVE TO READ THAT AGAIN, IT WILL BE THE DAY THAT I COMMIT SUICIDE. THAT WAS A FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT! OOC OOC OOC THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THAT. I HOPE THIS OFFENDS YOU DEEPLY

YOU SUCK
10/25/2010 c1 hepful hints or lack of
I never thought I would actually like that pairing, nice.
10/17/2010 c1 2Lele-the-Greek-Geek
although ( I hate to admit) this was OOC, this was brilliantly writtin. It was like a poem. You have lots of talent, especailly in hurt/comfort fics.

props for such a great fanfic.
10/12/2010 c1 Chrissy
WHAT THA FUCK
9/3/2010 c1 4JRose16
FAIL, EPIC FAIL! OOC OOC OOC OOC OOC
8/18/2010 c1 6texaskid13
OOC. fail, but REALLY liked your other story
8/18/2010 c1 Guest
I hated this piece of CRAP! Clarisse does not cry, and you just totally ruined her image. If she wanted to get sadnees or anger out she would have just beaten some dude up! Oh, and when you said 'bowing down to a man', first of all thats not what a boyfriend is, and second she has a boyfriend, CHRISS! ring-a-bell? This story is so ooc you prabably wrote this story 3 years after you read the first book! UGH UGH AND MORE UGH
7/26/2010 c1 4belly.buttons
Beautiful! I have been waiting for a Clarisse romance forever! I could just write one myself, but then I would know the ending, and where's the fun in that? ;D

Anyways, there wasn't a single flaw in this whole thing. You're a great author!
7/17/2010 c1 1mfinga19
This is definitely very different from other stories I've read. Good job.
7/16/2010 c1 Thursday 13
Original... very original. I'm jealous.
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