for The White Fire Prince6/11/2022 c4 Danirodriguez1995
Continue, please, with the story it's very good, I know I'm writing you about chapter 4, but please don't give up, it's a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison.
Continue, please, with the story it's very good, I know I'm writing you about chapter 4, but please don't give up, it's a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison.
12/25/2021 c5 
1Wolfy wanna bite
Great story. A small grammatical issue that's been bugging me is the way you use the word "as". I don't know if it's a culture difference or perhaps a translation issue but I don't ever recall hearing people use the word "as" the way you do; It's weird. Aside from that I love the story
1Wolfy wanna biteGreat story. A small grammatical issue that's been bugging me is the way you use the word "as". I don't know if it's a culture difference or perhaps a translation issue but I don't ever recall hearing people use the word "as" the way you do; It's weird. Aside from that I love the story
5/30/2021 c5 DEF
This was a nice story. The blending of the worlds as it stands is actually amazing. One thing that would be amazing to see later on if the story is still active is to see how hagaromo and Kaguya play a part in the combined worlds history and also how raga an vague stack up against bijou.
This was a nice story. The blending of the worlds as it stands is actually amazing. One thing that would be amazing to see later on if the story is still active is to see how hagaromo and Kaguya play a part in the combined worlds history and also how raga an vague stack up against bijou.
12/19/2020 c5 Luke1t0
I hope one day this story gets updated or if you look at the reviews
anyway I found the story to be really enjoyable, you have a way with words that kept me captivated and I hope one day this story continues. Regardless this is a really enjoyable story and id definitely recommend it
I hope one day this story gets updated or if you look at the reviews
anyway I found the story to be really enjoyable, you have a way with words that kept me captivated and I hope one day this story continues. Regardless this is a really enjoyable story and id definitely recommend it
9/24/2020 c2 6XXxxxadisxxxXX
Jesus christ this took a nose dive in the quality department. Hell it feels like it was written by an entirely different person.
6XXxxxadisxxxXXJesus christ this took a nose dive in the quality department. Hell it feels like it was written by an entirely different person.
9/19/2020 c1 WildFreedom
*pant* does not belong in stories. at all. like don't ever do it or anything like it.
*pant* does not belong in stories. at all. like don't ever do it or anything like it.
7/13/2020 c5 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
6/5/2020 c2 justlovereadin
I just wanna point out that the outfit Aang wore was the school outfit for a commoner. Probably not what a prince should be wearing in the palace
I just wanna point out that the outfit Aang wore was the school outfit for a commoner. Probably not what a prince should be wearing in the palace
4/29/2020 c5 dragondoradoga
I am fascinated by this story, hopefully they will release the new saga, thank you
I am fascinated by this story, hopefully they will release the new saga, thank you