
8/9/2010 c7 zdra8351
Loved the chapter, and Edwards POV also. cant wait to read how Edward reacts to Bella's news. Please update soon.
Loved the chapter, and Edwards POV also. cant wait to read how Edward reacts to Bella's news. Please update soon.
8/1/2010 c6
2BoOkSaReMyLyF
i love this story! plz write more! I bursted out laughing when u said how Emmett got Bella a first aid kit! i mean seriously "Look Bella, Bandaids!" is HILARIOUS! i was laughing so much that when my sis walked past she looked at me like i was a pyscho!

i love this story! plz write more! I bursted out laughing when u said how Emmett got Bella a first aid kit! i mean seriously "Look Bella, Bandaids!" is HILARIOUS! i was laughing so much that when my sis walked past she looked at me like i was a pyscho!
7/27/2010 c6
2Ma-ria-81
it's me again:)
if i thought ur other story was my favorite well i was wrong.
this is a truly amazing story.
i always wanted to read a story where bella falls for her bestfriend but i've never liked one enough to finish it.
can you updaye really really really fast?
because i might die if i don't read the rest
you don't want me to die...right?
btw its a shame it only has 44 reviews...i'll recommend it to my friends because its awesome
keep writing:)

it's me again:)
if i thought ur other story was my favorite well i was wrong.
this is a truly amazing story.
i always wanted to read a story where bella falls for her bestfriend but i've never liked one enough to finish it.
can you updaye really really really fast?
because i might die if i don't read the rest
you don't want me to die...right?
btw its a shame it only has 44 reviews...i'll recommend it to my friends because its awesome
keep writing:)
7/26/2010 c6 cordqueen
I like this story! I love Jasper! I'm so glad you have him and Bella being such good friends.
I like this story! I love Jasper! I'm so glad you have him and Bella being such good friends.
7/26/2010 c6 Freckles0628
I think this one fits the story-When she cries, the makeup runs from her eyes and spill the truth about how she feels inside.
I think this one fits the story-When she cries, the makeup runs from her eyes and spill the truth about how she feels inside.
7/25/2010 c6
1mrslautner101
This was a fantastic chapter and actually made me tear up a little. Would the forshadowing have anything to do with Jacob?(:
here are some funny quotes:
"Well arnt you a ray of freaking sunshine?","Someones cranky..someone needs to shut up!", "Awe your sweet how many girls have you said that to?", "Im not jealous I just hate that bitch.", "Can I have a coke...is pepsi okay?...I dont know is monopoly money okay?", "Is she pregnant?...I dont know go ask...no way! what if shes just fat?", "haha Im older..yea but your going to die first." "Oh my god are you hurt?..no Im bleeding because its fun.", "Your skin is a nice tint of orange..what ethnicity are you? Carrot perhaps?", "I didn't trip I was testing gravity...It still works.","Chill out, its only gym class not like its the world cup.", "Aww there soo cute...yea to bad shes cheating on him." Theres a lot more I could think of but i decided just to stick with these(: Reveiw fast!
"D

This was a fantastic chapter and actually made me tear up a little. Would the forshadowing have anything to do with Jacob?(:
here are some funny quotes:
"Well arnt you a ray of freaking sunshine?","Someones cranky..someone needs to shut up!", "Awe your sweet how many girls have you said that to?", "Im not jealous I just hate that bitch.", "Can I have a coke...is pepsi okay?...I dont know is monopoly money okay?", "Is she pregnant?...I dont know go ask...no way! what if shes just fat?", "haha Im older..yea but your going to die first." "Oh my god are you hurt?..no Im bleeding because its fun.", "Your skin is a nice tint of orange..what ethnicity are you? Carrot perhaps?", "I didn't trip I was testing gravity...It still works.","Chill out, its only gym class not like its the world cup.", "Aww there soo cute...yea to bad shes cheating on him." Theres a lot more I could think of but i decided just to stick with these(: Reveiw fast!
"D
7/25/2010 c6 TheTinyDancer
Wow, you are an amazing writer. Seriously, I just got tearful. At a fictional story.
Please update this soon! x
Wow, you are an amazing writer. Seriously, I just got tearful. At a fictional story.
Please update this soon! x
7/25/2010 c6 barbiedoll123
i guess im slow because i cant figure the foreshadowing out ,i do love this chapter
i guess im slow because i cant figure the foreshadowing out ,i do love this chapter
7/25/2010 c6 JordanGreigOfficial
lol heaster the malster, awesome! keep writing! omg make eddie see bella as a gf already! I am dying over here! lol Great story!
lol heaster the malster, awesome! keep writing! omg make eddie see bella as a gf already! I am dying over here! lol Great story!
7/25/2010 c6
1RyleighFTW
These quotes are from me and my friends: "I'm going home with a fucking smile on my face, dammit!" (you can exchange fucking for freaking, if you prefer :] ) "That's it, I'm leaving! *walks off* *walks back* I'm putting on pants first!" haha...well, great chapter...keep writing and update soon :)

These quotes are from me and my friends: "I'm going home with a fucking smile on my face, dammit!" (you can exchange fucking for freaking, if you prefer :] ) "That's it, I'm leaving! *walks off* *walks back* I'm putting on pants first!" haha...well, great chapter...keep writing and update soon :)
7/25/2010 c6 88897654
Awesome chapter. Can't wait until the next update.
And my favorite quote for the game is...
Men are like roses, you have to watch out for the pricks.
I love that quote.
Update soon.
Xoxo,
Cause-werewolves-don't-sparkle
Awesome chapter. Can't wait until the next update.
And my favorite quote for the game is...
Men are like roses, you have to watch out for the pricks.
I love that quote.
Update soon.
Xoxo,
Cause-werewolves-don't-sparkle