
4/29/2011 c12 Joseph
This is a whatever type of fanfic its way too rushed and super random happening in my opinion this isnt your best work but its still good
This is a whatever type of fanfic its way too rushed and super random happening in my opinion this isnt your best work but its still good
12/30/2010 c4
1shirt
LOL. What the . . .
I find it hard to believe if this is a crack fic or not. Everything is so random and rushed. Way too fast-paced to be taken seriously. Admittedly, I did not find it as littered with grammatical errors as most stories of this type are.
Good luck with your writing. I dearly hope you improve from this. Have a nice day.

LOL. What the . . .
I find it hard to believe if this is a crack fic or not. Everything is so random and rushed. Way too fast-paced to be taken seriously. Admittedly, I did not find it as littered with grammatical errors as most stories of this type are.
Good luck with your writing. I dearly hope you improve from this. Have a nice day.
7/31/2010 c11 Susie Montoya
I 3 this story please make a seond part!
I 3 this story please make a seond part!
7/28/2010 c1 Reed Martin
this story is the best i rofled pn the floor when alec and adrienne had sex and how you said it was there alone time lol
this story is the best i rofled pn the floor when alec and adrienne had sex and how you said it was there alone time lol
7/26/2010 c1 Carlos S
romatic two thumbs up!
romatic two thumbs up!
7/24/2010 c1 Yo Me Not You
Alec? Hmm I do have to admit his not one of the best twi characters but he is one of my favorites. He does seem shy in your story and in the twi books to so the idea of him not being shy and in love deserves 2 thumbs up!
Alec? Hmm I do have to admit his not one of the best twi characters but he is one of my favorites. He does seem shy in your story and in the twi books to so the idea of him not being shy and in love deserves 2 thumbs up!
7/24/2010 c1 BayBay Babe 3
ILY for writting this story! Thanks for using Stanwood!
ILY for writting this story! Thanks for using Stanwood!
7/24/2010 c7 Rayven
I want my Alec too! This is so romantic but if he loved her so much why did he turn her into a vampire? Was it because they both would of died if he didnt? Interesting story. And theres no more?
I want my Alec too! This is so romantic but if he loved her so much why did he turn her into a vampire? Was it because they both would of died if he didnt? Interesting story. And theres no more?
7/19/2010 c11
5Chubsie-Joergie
People this is Chubsie-Joergie and thank you for the reviews and stuff and please please review and comment and tell me if I should make the second part!

People this is Chubsie-Joergie and thank you for the reviews and stuff and please please review and comment and tell me if I should make the second part!
7/13/2010 c3
3Dawn Summer
Awesome story so far! Please UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

Awesome story so far! Please UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!