for Things That Go Bump In The Night11/26/2012 c1 xiratania
I have been sneaking around all day at work to read this story. I am a multishipper so I was very curious to see a mature Brenda/Flynn fic. I have not been disappointed. You write smut very well. So well that I may have been wiggling around in my seat a time or two. This definitely has to be one of my favorite stories. Job well done. I would love to see you write some more Flynn stories. I do not care who he is paired with I just want naked Flynn!
I have been sneaking around all day at work to read this story. I am a multishipper so I was very curious to see a mature Brenda/Flynn fic. I have not been disappointed. You write smut very well. So well that I may have been wiggling around in my seat a time or two. This definitely has to be one of my favorite stories. Job well done. I would love to see you write some more Flynn stories. I do not care who he is paired with I just want naked Flynn!
3/21/2012 c13 
13gaben
I think this was one of my favourite chapters ,all those little deliberations and observations, lol at flynne boner the size if a polish? Big huh. Loved them bringing ing up brenda's constant struggle with the names, but yeah I was with her, that was so simply funny , the names are so much the same l, all the l names and that other glandersthey all chorused,Lol for ages. Excellent comic pace in all of it. O am Aldo awed with your little descriptions of manerism and musings they are so subtle evocative and romantic... Like Brenda noticing his smell and his wet locks, and he noticing her ass, well may not always so subtle. Fun chapter especially provenza at the end.
13gabenI think this was one of my favourite chapters ,all those little deliberations and observations, lol at flynne boner the size if a polish? Big huh. Loved them bringing ing up brenda's constant struggle with the names, but yeah I was with her, that was so simply funny , the names are so much the same l, all the l names and that other glandersthey all chorused,Lol for ages. Excellent comic pace in all of it. O am Aldo awed with your little descriptions of manerism and musings they are so subtle evocative and romantic... Like Brenda noticing his smell and his wet locks, and he noticing her ass, well may not always so subtle. Fun chapter especially provenza at the end.
2/18/2012 c12 gaben
The case is clear, though another impasse, well perhaps untill Andy gets back, with or without a ding dong.. What is that.. I'm presuming something sweet... All the F surnames are a little confusing along with the dicks and dirks and you throw ding dongs into the mix...Lol though I live the playful nature of the case a great atmosphere to explore the characters and the relationship they are trying to get some time yo talk about . The taser lines were funny too.
The case is clear, though another impasse, well perhaps untill Andy gets back, with or without a ding dong.. What is that.. I'm presuming something sweet... All the F surnames are a little confusing along with the dicks and dirks and you throw ding dongs into the mix...Lol though I live the playful nature of the case a great atmosphere to explore the characters and the relationship they are trying to get some time yo talk about . The taser lines were funny too.
2/18/2012 c11 gaben
Fantastic interdespersing of the case and the resoloutions to Flynn and brenda's relationship questions, Sydney is still alot of fun... I can just see him getting turned on by Andy's mucho tough act.
You have Brenda down to a big fat T in the interogation room, her flighty musings and sothern charms.
Got to love the enuenfos at the end.. Yes the fogged always hood Lt.
I was with Flynn there for a moment during is declaration banter, thing Brenda was going to give him a taste of her hurt, good line and pick up when Andy asks her to admit she dlleps around because he knows that's not true, therefor it meant so
thing to both of them, great explanation for Andys early departure, Knoble but still probably dumb, but I actually think Brenda would appreciate that...
The best line... Would I kill provenza for another chance with you... Where's my weapon... Hmm I looked at his crutch... Oops. LOL
Fantastic interdespersing of the case and the resoloutions to Flynn and brenda's relationship questions, Sydney is still alot of fun... I can just see him getting turned on by Andy's mucho tough act.
You have Brenda down to a big fat T in the interogation room, her flighty musings and sothern charms.
Got to love the enuenfos at the end.. Yes the fogged always hood Lt.
I was with Flynn there for a moment during is declaration banter, thing Brenda was going to give him a taste of her hurt, good line and pick up when Andy asks her to admit she dlleps around because he knows that's not true, therefor it meant so
thing to both of them, great explanation for Andys early departure, Knoble but still probably dumb, but I actually think Brenda would appreciate that...
The best line... Would I kill provenza for another chance with you... Where's my weapon... Hmm I looked at his crutch... Oops. LOL
2/17/2012 c10 gaben
"What are you all of a sudden?" "My keeper?"...so..I lied. Wanna cuff me?" "You know I'm not into that kinky shit."...
"So..what's the dirt? What's going on with little Miss Southern Belle and the FBI guy?"
Now Syndey does sound a strange bod, but it all kind of makes sense... I love the fact that he's turned on by andy's bad cop role.
Love Brenda in this scene especially... handling andy and the suspect... Kudos you portayed her well, consiudering she would be pretty pissed... those little subtles had Flynn sweating.
"What are you all of a sudden?" "My keeper?"...so..I lied. Wanna cuff me?" "You know I'm not into that kinky shit."...
"So..what's the dirt? What's going on with little Miss Southern Belle and the FBI guy?"
Now Syndey does sound a strange bod, but it all kind of makes sense... I love the fact that he's turned on by andy's bad cop role.
Love Brenda in this scene especially... handling andy and the suspect... Kudos you portayed her well, consiudering she would be pretty pissed... those little subtles had Flynn sweating.
2/17/2012 c9 gaben
He had become complacent..lazy..accepting... well if you aske me he's thinking too much... but then ohhh creative thoughts and actions... did not disappoint brenda or me. great stuff. "You have to learn to..delegate more, Chief." and stop thinking about your mother... god I'm with him on that one, so glad he cleared that one up.
Somehow, it doesn't surprise me that he leaves before she wakes... realistic musings under the circimstances and kind of chivalrous in away and a bit different from his characters past... ahh yes well he must be in love as well as lust...
GREAT chapter.
He had become complacent..lazy..accepting... well if you aske me he's thinking too much... but then ohhh creative thoughts and actions... did not disappoint brenda or me. great stuff. "You have to learn to..delegate more, Chief." and stop thinking about your mother... god I'm with him on that one, so glad he cleared that one up.
Somehow, it doesn't surprise me that he leaves before she wakes... realistic musings under the circimstances and kind of chivalrous in away and a bit different from his characters past... ahh yes well he must be in love as well as lust...
GREAT chapter.
2/14/2012 c8 gaben
Wow Wow... great. full on and very romantic, very hot... and there is more too come... I mean arrive... arise... shutting up.. now, to say somnething sensible... Arrrrrr
...awaken in this instance to the delicate scent of Brenda's perfume which clung to his jacket like a soft hand caressing a rose.nice soft and fluffy pre-lude.
The John Wayne anaology was interesting... though I reckon ole conventional Marion Michael Morrison, may not have moved in on another mans gal, but he would gone and puched the guy ion the face just the same... "the hell he will..."
The compliment games over dinner was so much fun... the dance the bloodlines, the husky chuckles...
Brenda's responses when Andy started his play and his concious was gettimng to him was interesting and somewhat a little unexpected, but definetly what Andy needed.
Great love making scene.
Okay i read on now...
Wow Wow... great. full on and very romantic, very hot... and there is more too come... I mean arrive... arise... shutting up.. now, to say somnething sensible... Arrrrrr
...awaken in this instance to the delicate scent of Brenda's perfume which clung to his jacket like a soft hand caressing a rose.nice soft and fluffy pre-lude.
The John Wayne anaology was interesting... though I reckon ole conventional Marion Michael Morrison, may not have moved in on another mans gal, but he would gone and puched the guy ion the face just the same... "the hell he will..."
The compliment games over dinner was so much fun... the dance the bloodlines, the husky chuckles...
Brenda's responses when Andy started his play and his concious was gettimng to him was interesting and somewhat a little unexpected, but definetly what Andy needed.
Great love making scene.
Okay i read on now...
2/14/2012 c7 gaben
Wouldn't let me review chapter 7 or am I mixed up again. Oh well doesn't matter I'm back on line, well my computer anyway.
Love all the banter and sarcasism between these two, I think I start laughing every second line... "Yes he did, Chief and you know it." Flynn shook his head woefully for the out and out lie. "He's been calling all day."
"Well, thank you very much, Mr. Detective Person..how very observant of you...Andy felt better with her surliness returning..!" I can just see Brenda snapping at him...LOL.and a lot more.
I'm loving the way you have these two interacting... love andy's musings and his little smutty but hot innuendo's. actually, I don't know if you meant this way, and perhaps your other canon males were written the same way, but I trac the narrative through Andy's view, his eyes... etc. It's great, walking in his shoes.
Wouldn't let me review chapter 7 or am I mixed up again. Oh well doesn't matter I'm back on line, well my computer anyway.
Love all the banter and sarcasism between these two, I think I start laughing every second line... "Yes he did, Chief and you know it." Flynn shook his head woefully for the out and out lie. "He's been calling all day."
"Well, thank you very much, Mr. Detective Person..how very observant of you...Andy felt better with her surliness returning..!" I can just see Brenda snapping at him...LOL.and a lot more.
I'm loving the way you have these two interacting... love andy's musings and his little smutty but hot innuendo's. actually, I don't know if you meant this way, and perhaps your other canon males were written the same way, but I trac the narrative through Andy's view, his eyes... etc. It's great, walking in his shoes.
2/3/2012 c6 gaben
Oh, now I get what you meant about fritz, the twit!
Though the opportunity to have Brenda and Andy embrace was gorgeous.
Oh, now I get what you meant about fritz, the twit!
Though the opportunity to have Brenda and Andy embrace was gorgeous.
2/2/2012 c4 gaben
Yeah good luck Provenza...
Ohh a hidden passage and some fantastic flirtatious and sacastic quipps... love it.
very clever, the way you interspurse all the innuendo's with their trek though the obsticles of the passage.
"Donna and the Donkey and no..that stuff has never done it for me." He told the truth, halting his steps to address her directly, the dark brown eyes looking down into the frustrated cream of Brenda Lee Johnson's. Her flash light was held at such an angle to illuminate the delicate structure of her features. "Don't tell me you and the FBI guy have never discussed the benefits of.." He thought how to phrase it so as not to offend a lady. "...somewhat questionable sexual activity in all it's variable forms?"...
Creative writing. well done.
Yeah good luck Provenza...
Ohh a hidden passage and some fantastic flirtatious and sacastic quipps... love it.
very clever, the way you interspurse all the innuendo's with their trek though the obsticles of the passage.
"Donna and the Donkey and no..that stuff has never done it for me." He told the truth, halting his steps to address her directly, the dark brown eyes looking down into the frustrated cream of Brenda Lee Johnson's. Her flash light was held at such an angle to illuminate the delicate structure of her features. "Don't tell me you and the FBI guy have never discussed the benefits of.." He thought how to phrase it so as not to offend a lady. "...somewhat questionable sexual activity in all it's variable forms?"...
Creative writing. well done.
2/2/2012 c3 gaben
"So tragic. The son getting killed in the same way..in the same house." Brenda could not get used to all the odd things this house had to offer some unsuspecting 'tourist,' pulling her attention away from a three-headed alligator with an entire penguin stuck half way down it's throat, the small feet dangling precariously out of the powerful jaws...well, one of the jaws, anyway. The other two heads seemed normal enough..for this place.
So tragic... but why can't I stop laughing, what a very funny imagage and reaction you have painted here. Ohh there are so many funny, funny lines here...
Love all andy's little musings about the cheif... LOl at Provenza, having his back...
great chapter... sorry its been a while , I had to refresh my reading... but I'm back and determined to finsih this story, though I keep cracking up.
"So tragic. The son getting killed in the same way..in the same house." Brenda could not get used to all the odd things this house had to offer some unsuspecting 'tourist,' pulling her attention away from a three-headed alligator with an entire penguin stuck half way down it's throat, the small feet dangling precariously out of the powerful jaws...well, one of the jaws, anyway. The other two heads seemed normal enough..for this place.
So tragic... but why can't I stop laughing, what a very funny imagage and reaction you have painted here. Ohh there are so many funny, funny lines here...
Love all andy's little musings about the cheif... LOl at Provenza, having his back...
great chapter... sorry its been a while , I had to refresh my reading... but I'm back and determined to finsih this story, though I keep cracking up.
11/24/2011 c2 gaben
I wish I knew this show better, the personalities etc. But you have me intrigued just the same. I like the grotty references of an affair . You doing well with the case as well, a difficult job to do and another potential runaway train.
ROFL at the chapter headings , I went backwards and forwards twice... Every body play nice...
I wish I knew this show better, the personalities etc. But you have me intrigued just the same. I like the grotty references of an affair . You doing well with the case as well, a difficult job to do and another potential runaway train.
ROFL at the chapter headings , I went backwards and forwards twice... Every body play nice...
11/24/2011 c1 gaben
Just started this, love the plot and theme classic Hollywood . You do Brenda very well I just have to start reading as fast as she talks. Lol at the giant sculture, I could just see her face.
Just started this, love the plot and theme classic Hollywood . You do Brenda very well I just have to start reading as fast as she talks. Lol at the giant sculture, I could just see her face.
6/5/2011 c24 brook
Loved your story. I am not averse to a Brenda/Flynn fanfic. Would love to see a sequal. Again, thanks for a great read. I enjoy the CLOSER and am saddened by this being the last season with Brenda. I am not fond of smarmy Raydor, and I doubt it will last more than one season.
Loved your story. I am not averse to a Brenda/Flynn fanfic. Would love to see a sequal. Again, thanks for a great read. I enjoy the CLOSER and am saddened by this being the last season with Brenda. I am not fond of smarmy Raydor, and I doubt it will last more than one season.
5/31/2011 c24 brook
Just found your fanfic site. Loved the story=Brenda/Flynn much better than Brenda/Fritx. Would love to see you continue with
another story with the "alien" plot. Thanks again for a good read!
Just found your fanfic site. Loved the story=Brenda/Flynn much better than Brenda/Fritx. Would love to see you continue with
another story with the "alien" plot. Thanks again for a good read!