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7Laeslaer
Im rewatching the series and searched through my old favorite fics to find this one. The humor is spot on
Ed wanting to lick all of Mustangs pens, the detail about his automail arm denting wood, Al glaring at Mustang giving Ed a new mission, Riza only shooting Mustang in the leg
Its amazing!
7LaeslaerIm rewatching the series and searched through my old favorite fics to find this one. The humor is spot on
Ed wanting to lick all of Mustangs pens, the detail about his automail arm denting wood, Al glaring at Mustang giving Ed a new mission, Riza only shooting Mustang in the leg
Its amazing!
10/23/2023 c16 Guest
Great story! Thank you for writing it.
Great story! Thank you for writing it.
10/23/2023 c16 Guest
Great story! Thank you for writing it.
Great story! Thank you for writing it.
7/10/2022 c16 Guest
My favourite fma fic. Thank you :)
My favourite fma fic. Thank you :)
5/28/2022 c16 Denise
Thank you! I enjoyed this!
Thank you! I enjoyed this!
3/10/2022 c12 43Curlscat
"he felt like he'd been knocking on death's door and had only escaped because no one had been home" is SUCH a raw line and i love it-i've thoroughly enjoyed most of this fic but i needed to point out this line in particular
43Curlscat"he felt like he'd been knocking on death's door and had only escaped because no one had been home" is SUCH a raw line and i love it-i've thoroughly enjoyed most of this fic but i needed to point out this line in particular
8/24/2021 c16 Daughter-of-Athena-2358
What a way to end the night! I'm so glad I stayed up for this! <3 I especially loved how you handled Leon, and Coronel Mustang at the end! Absolute masterpiece!
What a way to end the night! I'm so glad I stayed up for this! <3 I especially loved how you handled Leon, and Coronel Mustang at the end! Absolute masterpiece!
7/13/2021 c16 Guest
Wow, wow, WOW!
What an amazing story! I’m so sad it’s over, but sooooo glad I read it. Author, FANTASTIC work! You put in such time an effort, and it clearly shows here. Be so proud of yourself and the incredible tale you’ve given to Ed and the gang!
Wow, wow, WOW!
What an amazing story! I’m so sad it’s over, but sooooo glad I read it. Author, FANTASTIC work! You put in such time an effort, and it clearly shows here. Be so proud of yourself and the incredible tale you’ve given to Ed and the gang!
6/12/2021 c16 Jac
I loved this! I loved how plotty it was, but also how heartbreaking it was at times. I like how you showed how isolating Ed's lack of trust is, but also how relatable and understandable it is considering what he's been through. Thank you for writing this!
I loved this! I loved how plotty it was, but also how heartbreaking it was at times. I like how you showed how isolating Ed's lack of trust is, but also how relatable and understandable it is considering what he's been through. Thank you for writing this!
6/8/2021 c16 Ohana15
Another amazing work you've created! Your writing style always pulls me in right next to the characters and the way you tell your stories just imprints them in my mind. You have such a talent for story-telling and writing
Another amazing work you've created! Your writing style always pulls me in right next to the characters and the way you tell your stories just imprints them in my mind. You have such a talent for story-telling and writing
1/23/2021 c12 16elricsyao
Every single time I read this chapter, I remember why I hate samantha. She pisses me off so badly cause Leon is a criminal! She was assisting a criminal! Ugh! Can't stand her
16elricsyaoEvery single time I read this chapter, I remember why I hate samantha. She pisses me off so badly cause Leon is a criminal! She was assisting a criminal! Ugh! Can't stand her
12/17/2020 c11 1NarutoAdmirer21
I forgot to mention - some of the parts of this story are especially heart-breaking
Ed asking Al for his arm back was emotionally devastating
And so was Ed being okay with Al taking his arm and his leg so long as he stayed with him
Absolutely loved this!
1NarutoAdmirer21I forgot to mention - some of the parts of this story are especially heart-breaking
Ed asking Al for his arm back was emotionally devastating
And so was Ed being okay with Al taking his arm and his leg so long as he stayed with him
Absolutely loved this!
12/17/2020 c16 NarutoAdmirer21
The way you conveyed the slow deterioration of Ed's health and his slow understanding of his trust in others was great!
And the part when Ed was incredibly sick and told Walter and everyone else around him all about his past was so sad to read - and seeing how distraught Al was was awful!
I absolutely loved reading this!
The way you conveyed the slow deterioration of Ed's health and his slow understanding of his trust in others was great!
And the part when Ed was incredibly sick and told Walter and everyone else around him all about his past was so sad to read - and seeing how distraught Al was was awful!
I absolutely loved reading this!