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11/10/2012 c1 Kingtr011
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10/20/2012 c1 caligo-lux
well...it was certainly not what i was expecting...
and i dont know why but i am quite annoyed about toothless beeing knocked up...it just seems so off...
( i like toothless to be male)

but aside from my aversion to a female pregnant tootheless, do i have to say that your story was well thought through.
it had a really nice flow and some twists and quirks...and even historical cultural stuff that made it a real enjoyable treat
the people were in character and that made it easy to imagine the whole situation, so good work on the characterizations.

all in all...really, really good work...
ps: and even though i am no female pregnant toothless fan...the babys were just to cute
9/23/2012 c1 12Angel of Randomosity
XD XD XD Aawwwweeee Ssho cuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttteeee! X3
Lol. The "I shook his hand" thing, was that based of Dumb and Dumberer where he was all "There's sh!t everywhere. There's SH!T everywhere! THERE IS SH!T EVERYWHERE!" X'D
9/5/2012 c1 Guest
nicey nice nice
10/24/2011 c1 6P3MF Alpha 3-Richter
My... This was a lovely oneshot. Toothless as a mother seems to be a good one, if her protection of Hiccup is anything to go by.

What DOES the hand-shake mean? I can't figure it out...
9/5/2011 c1 rt
is the reference from shawsack redemption when it says "i wish to shake his hand?
5/2/2011 c1 33Consuelo Higdon
I love this story. I had always thought of Toothless as a girl both because of the egg scene, and because of how often she acted like a protective mother figure. Especially at the end when she saves Hiccup; they looked just like a mother and a newborn!

This was a wonderful read and the characters were amazing. They stayed perfectly in character and their actions were all believable, and even when the story went into more mature pastures than the original movie it still kept the feel of the characters and the world they live in.

Thank you for writing this wonderful story! I love it!
1/17/2011 c1 3GeorgieGirl999
awwww! thats is soooo cute! i love it! good job!
1/15/2011 c1 14Kuroneko6
Aaaaw. That's cute. I like the little Hiccup Jr the best
12/29/2010 c1 black robin
hay i read your disclaimer not the story yet but i gust wont to tell that you can find the 'HOW TO TRAIN YOUR DRAGON' books on YOUTUBE and read (not really read becouse a voise reads it to you so ya) and the books are really good! :)(:
12/11/2010 c1 5Fox of Apocolypse
That is so cool. I think you should do more, and have the little dragons growing up and all that. I think that klutzy one should be called dizzy.

12/10/2010 c1 2Xtraitor
I thought this was really cute. Poor Toothless
11/18/2010 c1 adgjlkhfs
How clever to use that two-second bit in the movie to write an entire story! I loved it. =) But watch your word choice in the first little bit of the story - it got to be kind of a mouthful with all those words.

9/10/2010 c1 5Derr Gotik
Wow this was truly an interesting read. I always thought of toothless as a boy (so did everyone and their dog lol)simply due to his reaction when Astrid Kissed Hiccup in the cove after the flight. That and it just seems like two guys having fun when they're together. And of course Toothless jumping in to save Hiccup during that fiasco w/ the Monstrous Nightmare. I kinda found the birth scene a little disturbing but that's probably just cuz I'm a guy lol. All in all a good read c:

Are you planning a chapter to succeed this one?
8/28/2010 c1 34ever2010
well, first of all, u need to send me 2 cookies cuz i just couldnt get over how funnny it was when Hiccup was screaming "I SHOOK HIS HAND!" and ye i got it and my best friend got it too when we watched this one video on youtube made by "Ray Wiliiam Johnson" and in the beginning the dude in the vid just randomly said somethin about the vice prez's testicals? so ye i told her "Hiccup shook Toothless' hand!" and then the dude just said the thing about the...you know...and i was like "just like that!" and i was reffering to that sentenece then my friend got all wierded out...

so srry for boring u out wit dat, but i do have A VERY IMPORTANT QUESTION I NED U TO ANSWER FOR ME! will u b making another chapter to follow this? pls rply soon! cuz i luv this story, even thought its actually just one chapter, it took me hours to read, which killed time, so thx for that...anyways, r u going to make another chapter? cuz, dude, i would be jumping for joy around my friends neighborhood...and im not kidding...if u told me u wer making another chapter, or if ur story is gonna become a several-chapter story, i would definitely jump around
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