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4/12/2011 c1 19Aleprettycat
awww me gustó mucho el fic

sobre todo la escenita que Kid Flash preparó con Jinxie, muy tierno de verdad y... em... jajaja cuando leí lo que decía la abuela pfff me recordó a las señoras de barrio o a las de provincia jejeje, pero bueno

me gustó mucho el fic

corre Kid flash, corre por tu vida! XD
2/28/2011 c1 mysticcrystalhope
love the story...it's pretty stupid if someone we love teaching us some languages and then we don't a word he saying and he teach the word like kid flash said...xD
1/27/2011 c1 kodi-dama
Hi. This is my very first review on a story, so it may not be very good.

This story was hilarious! No-one was OOC, which is hard to do. (Or so I've heard. I haven't written any fanfics myself)

I hope you didn't get too big a headache from language-switching, Keep up the good work!
10/31/2010 c1 27roughdiamond5
You know, I almost couldn't tell that English isn't your first language. I see so many typos on this website that you fit in with everyone else here. (Does that sound like a compliment? I hope so.) You do, however, need to use more contractions (two words put together, like can't, you're, and it's).

I like this story, though. It was very funny to read, and I loved how Kid Flash taught Jinx to say that she was his girlfriend. The ending was also very appropriate, since Jinx would definitely be furious. ^^ Keep writing! You're doing well.
10/20/2010 c1 1moonligth.shadow
Me facina! haha Kid flash y Jinx son mi pareja favorita, tus historias me encantan. Y tambien me gustan Mas y Menos, son tan lindos y su acento me gusta mucho, pero no sabia que eran de Mexico crei que era de Guatemala.Ok , te deseo buena suerte, tus historias son de lo mejor, y aun espero actualizaciones de tus historias. bye!
10/9/2010 c1 7Uncertain Anonymous
that was hilarious. Wally must've been having fun, up until Jinx wanted to see those spellings. lol!
7/27/2010 c1 24OhHollyHolly
Hola, lo bueno de hablar 2 idiomas es

que puedo leer sin utilizar un traductor, jaja

me gustó mucho, está super original y super

romántica sin llegar a lo meloso xD

Que lindo eso de "novia" y "te quiero"

Amm, solo una aclaración: Más y Menos no son de México

son de Guatemala.

PD: Gracias por agregarme.

Sigue escribiendo Flinx
7/24/2010 c1 5alex-alex7
I loved this!
7/17/2010 c1 Anonymous
es bueno
7/17/2010 c1 33Hopelessly Unromantic
xDDDDDDDddD

TE AMO! Love this story actually. (: Just because.
7/16/2010 c1 8XxNenisCullenxX
XDDD LOL~ para mi corto ingles aprendido lo entendi todito sin usar el traductor de google XDDDD~ LOLaso! *w* seee asdasd buen fic :3 XD qe bien qe a Jinxie le interese el español y no otros idioman como el frances x'DDDUu :3 bueno! a favoriitos *w* y sige escribiendo fics de Flinx 8D no importa si estan en español o ingles xDD creo qe puedo manejarlo XDD

pd: hubiera dicho lo mismo qe maria margarita si me entero de esa manera e-e XDDDDDD
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