for Of Kith and Kin2/10/2017 c24 myadryk89
Awesome. So original. It's the first time I read about surrogacy in a fanfic. What Bella did was brave, I know I woudn't be able to do something like that.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.
Awesome. So original. It's the first time I read about surrogacy in a fanfic. What Bella did was brave, I know I woudn't be able to do something like that.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.
2/9/2017 c24 Cecily
And yet he still broke her heart. If he was so in love with Bella why was it so easy for him to be with other women? And will we ever get an outtake of him and Tanya's time in Italy and Forks?
And yet he still broke her heart. If he was so in love with Bella why was it so easy for him to be with other women? And will we ever get an outtake of him and Tanya's time in Italy and Forks?
2/9/2017 c22 Cecily
What a dick, so he wanted her to be alone and sad while he was happily in Florence with Tanya?!
What a dick, so he wanted her to be alone and sad while he was happily in Florence with Tanya?!
2/9/2017 c21 Cecily
So are they also going to visit family friend Tanya? He did enjoy her a lot in Italy didn't he?
So are they also going to visit family friend Tanya? He did enjoy her a lot in Italy didn't he?
2/9/2017 c20 Cecily
This is such a cop out. How is Edward cleared of all the guilt? Bella didn't know he loved her, whereas Edward knew damn well Bella loved him. He moved on rather quickly with Tanya, and was going to marry her. Unless he remained celibate for six years, all the fault lies with Edward.
This is such a cop out. How is Edward cleared of all the guilt? Bella didn't know he loved her, whereas Edward knew damn well Bella loved him. He moved on rather quickly with Tanya, and was going to marry her. Unless he remained celibate for six years, all the fault lies with Edward.
2/9/2017 c18 Cecily
Uh no. None of this is Bella's fault. This is all on Edward. What was Bella supposed to do when Edward told her he never said he loved her? Act like a deranged stalker?
Edward broke her so it was up to Edward to fix things.
Uh no. None of this is Bella's fault. This is all on Edward. What was Bella supposed to do when Edward told her he never said he loved her? Act like a deranged stalker?
Edward broke her so it was up to Edward to fix things.
2/9/2017 c17 Cecily
Well I see Edward gets his cruel streak from Esme. She knew Bella was heartbroken about a Edward, yet she just raved about Tanya becoming her daughter, and Edward?! He just sickens me. He's been in love with Bella for so long, and yet he had no problem breaking her heart, having sex and almost marrying Tanya, and then belittling Bella when he thought she was pregnant with Jake's baby...I hope Bella finally wakes up and moves on from the Cullens. They are just toxic to her. A bunch of parasites that only ever take from her.
Well I see Edward gets his cruel streak from Esme. She knew Bella was heartbroken about a Edward, yet she just raved about Tanya becoming her daughter, and Edward?! He just sickens me. He's been in love with Bella for so long, and yet he had no problem breaking her heart, having sex and almost marrying Tanya, and then belittling Bella when he thought she was pregnant with Jake's baby...I hope Bella finally wakes up and moves on from the Cullens. They are just toxic to her. A bunch of parasites that only ever take from her.
2/9/2017 c16 Cecily
Bella is just pathetic. How can she still be under Edward's thrall? He didn't give a damn about her when he was away with other women.
Bella is just pathetic. How can she still be under Edward's thrall? He didn't give a damn about her when he was away with other women.
2/8/2017 c21 SLKerouac
Bella loved the Cullen family and she had always loved Edward. There was a lot of avoidance and less communication. Edward had to learn to be truthful but Bella had that problem too. Bella also had to learn to trust Edward again. Also Edward needed to help Bella through the whole pregnancy. It took talking from Esme and other for Bella to see what was in front of her. That Edward loved her but was scared or scared off by Charlie and Carlisle. It took a real emergency with Bella to see that he had always loved her and he wanted her in his life. Taking the time Edward and Bella learned to trust each other. Really nice story. Thanks for writing!
Bella loved the Cullen family and she had always loved Edward. There was a lot of avoidance and less communication. Edward had to learn to be truthful but Bella had that problem too. Bella also had to learn to trust Edward again. Also Edward needed to help Bella through the whole pregnancy. It took talking from Esme and other for Bella to see what was in front of her. That Edward loved her but was scared or scared off by Charlie and Carlisle. It took a real emergency with Bella to see that he had always loved her and he wanted her in his life. Taking the time Edward and Bella learned to trust each other. Really nice story. Thanks for writing!
1/28/2017 c16 figglypudding
please tell me Bella eventually properly confronts Edward about slutshaming her fucking TWICE now! oh my goodness that got my blood boiling. and him telling her to watch her language! oh i wanted to rip his bronze locks out from his self-righteous scalp in that moment. you sure do know how to illicit reactions from a reader. great story!
please tell me Bella eventually properly confronts Edward about slutshaming her fucking TWICE now! oh my goodness that got my blood boiling. and him telling her to watch her language! oh i wanted to rip his bronze locks out from his self-righteous scalp in that moment. you sure do know how to illicit reactions from a reader. great story!
1/16/2017 c24 Liz Ben
I was all ready to go stalkerish into the night? Wiping my eyes because the angst was so lovely, and then you tip the last chapter on me. Gah that ilfilled up my heart to overflowing. So here I am, favouriting, commenting, thanking you for sharing your talent with us mere mortals. So, so lovely writing. Keep writing. You have the gift.
I was all ready to go stalkerish into the night? Wiping my eyes because the angst was so lovely, and then you tip the last chapter on me. Gah that ilfilled up my heart to overflowing. So here I am, favouriting, commenting, thanking you for sharing your talent with us mere mortals. So, so lovely writing. Keep writing. You have the gift.
1/6/2017 c20 Texas Bottle Blonde
This chapter is dripping with sweet, sugary love. All the openesses, forgiveness, and kisses made me teary but every bit worked.
This chapter is dripping with sweet, sugary love. All the openesses, forgiveness, and kisses made me teary but every bit worked.
1/5/2017 c8 Texas Bottle Blonde
Another great chapter. I wonder how different many lives would be today if we had Esme as our Mother.
Another great chapter. I wonder how different many lives would be today if we had Esme as our Mother.
1/3/2017 c21 
9timidvampire
i loved this story, thank you.
when you talked about the differnt ways that love was shown... Jasper broke my heart a little x
9timidvampirei loved this story, thank you.
when you talked about the differnt ways that love was shown... Jasper broke my heart a little x
12/23/2016 c21 Leah
Love your fanfic. It makes you cry and smile at the same time.
Love your fanfic. It makes you cry and smile at the same time.