
7/16/2010 c1
23Alby Mangroves
I loved this: "Since I'd become pregnant, my skin was always so dry. You'd never know I held an ocean within my stomach." It's EXACTLY how I'm feeling right now. It's real life details like this that make your stories such a great read. They ring true.

I loved this: "Since I'd become pregnant, my skin was always so dry. You'd never know I held an ocean within my stomach." It's EXACTLY how I'm feeling right now. It's real life details like this that make your stories such a great read. They ring true.
7/16/2010 c1
1annniej13
Fantastic first chap, chickie. I'm completely intrigued! Looking forward to more.
xxoo
annie

Fantastic first chap, chickie. I'm completely intrigued! Looking forward to more.
xxoo
annie
7/16/2010 c1 DinaMarie-86
Oh my. I'm loving it! So many ?'s. What happened to Alice? Who is the baby daddy? And what the hell happened w/B&E?
Can't wait to read more, thank you for writing :)
Oh my. I'm loving it! So many ?'s. What happened to Alice? Who is the baby daddy? And what the hell happened w/B&E?
Can't wait to read more, thank you for writing :)
7/16/2010 c1
31spanglemaker9
I'm already hooked! Must. Know. Backstory! I'm glad to read that it's mostly written because I want another hit like, yesterday!

I'm already hooked! Must. Know. Backstory! I'm glad to read that it's mostly written because I want another hit like, yesterday!
7/16/2010 c1
1christag banner
Wow! I am a confused bugger.
Alice is ill, Cancer?
Bella is pregnant, who's the daddy?
Edward's an ass, what happened there?
Can't wait to find out what happed to these guys.

Wow! I am a confused bugger.
Alice is ill, Cancer?
Bella is pregnant, who's the daddy?
Edward's an ass, what happened there?
Can't wait to find out what happed to these guys.
7/16/2010 c1
31FarDareisMai2
*bounces* I'm so so so happy you're finally publishing this! I love this chapter; the atmosphere, mystery, emotion. It's all perfection! 3

*bounces* I'm so so so happy you're finally publishing this! I love this chapter; the atmosphere, mystery, emotion. It's all perfection! 3