for I was so lost8/11/2010 c1 
16Insanemistosingsmore
Just a couple of small grammer issues (i.e. it should be 'men' instead of 'mans') but nothing too unfixable. The concept and the emotions are pretty awesome for a first fan-fic. Keep up the good work...
16InsanemistosingsmoreJust a couple of small grammer issues (i.e. it should be 'men' instead of 'mans') but nothing too unfixable. The concept and the emotions are pretty awesome for a first fan-fic. Keep up the good work...
7/18/2010 c1 3Silent Pandemonium
hoi hoi, congretulations with your first fic!
Not a Jesus Christ Superstar fan but I loved it.
thumbs up!
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Silent Pandemonium
3Silent Pandemoniumhoi hoi, congretulations with your first fic!
Not a Jesus Christ Superstar fan but I loved it.
thumbs up!
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Silent Pandemonium